Time for some good ol' fashion OCD. I did 2 attempts at fattening her face up and applied the same color and shadow adjustments for comparison.
One version has more going on with her cheeks, while the other is simpler in comparison. Which do you like more? Just to note I still need to clean these up (fix the beauty marks, hair, etc), and more colors, textures, and details will be added in. The textures and other things are ready to go, but I don't want to ruin the surprise until its done...
Also, What color do you guys want her hair to be? Included an example using the 2nd face as a base