Vowron Prime

Announcement of ch 33-36 edits

Added 2023-02-07 01:47:25 +0000 UTC

Hi everyone,

Just wanted to appraise you of some edits re: Vir and Maiya's behavior during the saran trip(chaps 33-36). Here's a summary of the changes (Be warned of spoilers if you haven't read through these chapters yet)

1. Vir and Maiya are both now far less forgiving of the urchins, especially initially, once they discover the urchins had a hand in setting them up. Maiya punches Alda in the gut when she finds out, causing the urchin to double over.

She then steals back the coins Vir had given Alda for helping them escape the jail (3 silvers), and they arrive at an understanding where the urchins will get paid only if they help Vir & Maiya escape with Bumpy.

This does happen, and Vir returns the coin bag to Alda right before they board bakura's ship, but only returns two silvers. (which means they return with 3 silvers and change, instead of coming back emptyhanded. They hide this money away for future use.)

2. Along similar lines, Vir and Maiya are now less friendly toward the urchins, though they eventually warm up a bit after learning of their plight. Never to 'friendship' levels, though.

3. Alda and Barid's self pity has been toned down.

As always, thank you for your feedback!