Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School (92/?)
Added 2024-07-28 17:05:02 +0000 UTCThe Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1100
Auris
Dread is the taint which masks the otherwise brilliant soul, a self-fulfilling prophecy which only fools fall prey to.
Hope is the fruit which nurtures the uncertain mind, a sweet and sumptuous escape, that serves only to weaken the spirit.
Confidence is the fuel with which the noble soul thrives, and it is only through confidence that the darkness of dread is vanquished, and the foolishness of hope is tempered.
Confidence, leads to faith, and faith in what was righteous, was the strongest faculty a sapient being could ever develop.
Confidence, along with faith, are thus the cornerstones of nobility.
And it was because of both of these tenets, that I had no doubt as to the results of this magical competition.
Magic was, after all, the unassailable instrument of the noble and righteous.
Everything that the newrealmer wasn’t, and everything that the newrealmer lacked.
The mana-deprived newrealmer was running purely off of the abilities granted by her muscle-bound survivalist society.
A society unfit, undeserving, and ultimately, ill-equipped to integrate with the demands of civilization.
The armor was an aesthetic diversion, a masterpiece of showmanship, meant to hide the savage beast lurking beneath it.
Savage, being the operative word in this instance.
Beastly, being the only descriptor capable of explaining away the impressive feats of strengths demonstrated by the newrealmer.
As without the ebb and flow of mana, owing to the offensive nature of her armor, only brute strength remained as an explanation for the newrealmer’s strange proclivities for athletics.
Which meant that her actions were no better than the defiant posturing of an unruly beast.
And as with any beast, there were limits to the power that brute strength could offer.
Limits that often began with the utilization of magic.
Limits that had already started showing even as early as in the unaugmented strength challenge, and was once again manifesting now at the wall.
Limits that had left the beast stranded at the foot of the wall, unable to climb, and thus unable to proceed.
I stood atop of the wall for just a moment, at peace, and with a resurgence of confidence that flooded my very soul with a surge of utter delight.
I felt, in that moment, like I was on top of the world.
I felt euphoria, in every sense of the word.
I gazed out towards the sea of shambling bodies, towards the rapidly ascending Thalmin, Qiv, and Gumigo with a light-hearted delight. As even they were a welcome sight that proved a point which I had been making throughout this competition — that magic overcomes all obstacles in its path.
Even if one of the aforementioned three won in my stead, my points would be vindicated.
Though I had little incentive to allow that to happen. Not when I still had a body to utilize, and my word to live up to.
And so, with a grin and a chuckle, I began making my way forwards.
My path, and the rest of my peers’ paths, immediately started becoming something of a challenge as the seemingly straightforward ‘rooftops’ we faced started shifting and contorting.
Some of the platforms rose, whilst others fell, whilst others even began changing size, shape, and dimensions with each passing second.
The mythic encabulator seemed to be reacting to us, in the same way that the raising of the gates had increased in weight the higher and higher we raised it.
I could feel its latent eyes, its constant poking and prodding at the edges of my manafield.
I could even feel it peering into my very soul at times.
“A worthy challenge, wouldn’t you say, my fellows?!” I turned back to the winded group, as I stood tall aloft one of the higher platforms in the rapidly growing sea of platforms.
“A worthy challenge, indeed, Lord Ping!” Several voices responded, not from the aforementioned three of course, but from the rapidly growing crowd who seemed to relish in the newrealmer’s assured demise.
A crowd that now followed me forward into the thick of things, trailing just behind my only three worthy competitors.
My mind was now practically rid of the newrealmer, as my eyes were now poised towards the end of this vertical dungeon.
Yet a gnawing feeling had me looking back, if only to placate the fears of my earlier experiences.
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The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1105
Qiv
Dark was the newrealmer’s presence in the manafield.
And darker were her aims if her intent was to be trusted.
She was difficult to miss, yet easy to forget, so as we surged forward I found her presence muted and gone.
Yet I knew that the newrealmer was not a typical beast.
I knew that despite the odds, a complete non sequitur may yet derail Lord Ping’s preemptive victory lap.
So whilst my stakes in this race were nonexistent, as either outcome would lead only to a desirable conclusion in the near to mid term, I still couldn’t help but to ponder on the newrealmer’s capabilities.
What exactly lay beneath the armor that allowed her to perform such great feats?
Was it her kind’s sheer physicality?
Or was there something more?
Something that the Academy wished to hide beneath what truly was the most likely explanation.
I had no reason to doubt the words of the upper yearsmen or faculty.
I had no reason to conceive of any other reason but brute physical strength as an explanation to the newrealmer’s proclivities for athletics.
Yet I couldn’t help but to notice the disparity in the newrealmer’s recent feats of strength.
From her lifting of the gates, to the debacle with the family of bears, the weights she now effortlessly dealt with were all far, far heavier than the ones she withdrew from earlier in the unaugmented segment of the competition.
So with that discrepancy, amidst so many more discrepancies, I am left to wonder…
Exactly what lies beneath the armor?
Or perhaps, more pertinently, did I care to find out?
And was it worth the risk of sticking my nose where it clearly was not wanted?
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The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1120
Auris
“Victory was never in doubt, Lord Ping!” Came one of the many voices of support as I reached the end of the vertical dungeon.
I could feel my heart beating harder, my breath hitching up higher, and my whole body shaking as we crested the final obstacle.
But it wasn’t because of exhaustion.
It was because of sheer euphoria.
Peering over my shoulder for good measure, I saw naught but the tenacious three, with Prince Havenbrock leading the charge.
No signs of the newrealmer.
And thus, only relief to be had.
I looked down below to see a strikingly empty path ahead, which prompted me to take the journey down from the platform with a degree of caution.
The newrealmer was woefully behind now.
That fact continued to resonate in my mind as my feet finally touched solid ground, and amplified even moreso as I stared back up towards the ‘competition’, fists by my side in a pose typically reserved only in moments of assured victory.
Hoots and hollers were made from high above, as well as from far across the field from the stands.
This was the challenge I’d set out to conquer.
This was the untempered and unfettered high of victory.
“My dear fellows!” I proclaimed loudly. “His Eternal Majesty smiles on us, on all of us, today!” I made sure to include the rest of the rabble for good measure.
The social game wasn’t without a need to inflate your disciples’ egos.
My father was always right in that regard.
So, with my back now turned towards the wall and the rapidly descending tenacious three, I set my sights forward towards the penultimate challenge.
“Onto victory!” I shouted, but just as I was imbuing my body with yet another spell, so too did I feel a disturbance in the manastreams.
As well as a series of audible thumps that became increasingly more pronounced with each passing second.
Thump.
THUMP.
THUMP.
The noises increased in volume, and with each passing erroneous noise, came inexplicable vibrations from behind the walls.
Was the encabulator preparing some other challenge?
Was this an unexpected guardian sent by the encabulator to wrestle me from my victory spree?
I turned towards the professor, who responded only with a shrug.
This prompted me to start running, as I realized this wasn’t a part of the challenges, and thus not a worthy obstacle to take note of.
This didn’t stop the noises or vibrations however.
The thumps quickly morphing into outright crashes.
As I could now feel the ground quite literally shaking, the noises growing louder, and a low rumbling approaching closer and closer by the second.
Until finally…
CRASH!
The tell-tale sounds of brick and mortar crumbling suddenly filled the air.
A cloud of dust quickly enveloped the field, debris managing to land as far as a few steps ahead of me, my run being brought to a premature halt.
I paused, feeling a shiver run down my spine as I took a moment to catch my breath.
My whole body tensed, and my fur stood up on end, as I clenched my eyes tight before turning around.
Behind me was a cloud of dust, and a group of students coughing up a storm.
But in the middle of the crowd, right in the midst of the hole in the wall, were two glowing red eyes that pierced straight through the thick plume like a raging dragon shrouded in a mist of soot of its own making; its sights set on none other but me.
It was around that time that I felt my heart drop, and my whole body flinching in a way I hadn’t experienced before.
This was followed up by a sudden tensing, an inability to move, and a cold shiver that ran through my veins as I saw that armored form suddenly sprinting forwards at unprecedented speeds.
There was naught a hint of a mana surge, nor a breath to be had.
There was only that awful, ear-piercing sound, of high pitched whirs and thumping metal.
There was only the unnatural, unholy, presence that never ceased.
There was only the eternal hunter that gained rapidly behind me.
I could barely hold a shout as I turned around.
My mind was now occupied with only one thought.
RUN!
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The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1120
Emma
“WHEW! OH YEAH! WE DID IT!” I uttered out with an ecstatic breath, resisting the urge to do a little victory dance as we emerged through the magical brick and mortar with the energy of a raging bull.
The walls were still no joke though.
But according to the EVI, the strength of the walls were averaged to around that of your typical brick and mortar house.
The suit handled it perfectly.
And better yet, it seemed as if we’d caught up to the bull just in the nick of time.
The man stared at me with a mortified expression that felt so visceral it honestly shook me a bit.
But then I realized…
“The element of surprise, Emma. Don’t be surprised by your own surprise on the enemy. When you see them confused, just book it!”
That’s where the Book it Booker TSEC memes came from, after all.
And I wasn’t about to let those legends die in just a single generation.
So, without much prompting, I embraced my namesake, and booked it.
It felt freeing to not be slowed down by the speedbumps that were the walls.
A fact that was reflected in my larger strides and the slight bump in speed.
It wasn’t enough that the bull seemed to have a hard time matching, though it was clear that his huffs weren’t from exhaustion this time around, but from panic; his wide eyed expression maintained for hundreds of meters as we made our way towards the next station.
This time, we were met with what looked to be another bear-guard sitting in a little guard house next to a drawbridge.
Though given how strewn about his equipment was, it was clear there was something about the narrative that had changed.
“Oh adventurer! You came in the nick of time!” Each of our bears spoke, more or less at the same time as we arrived at our respective stations simultaneously. “An evil beast has taken over the kingdom’s castle! You must stop him and save our kingdom! However, the hoards of evil now rapidly approach my bridge, and we must first weather the storm by leading them to their doom by having them fall into the infinite chasms below!” The bear gestured towards the large chasm the drawbridges crossed — what appeared to be an infinite void with sheer-faced cliffs on either side. “This is where your help will be needed. I was assaulted and my injuries are far too grievous, so I am afraid I cannot help.” He paused, gesturing at his knee, which had a particularly large arrow sticking out of it. “Moreover, the beast has damaged the bridge’s artifices, so you must use your strength to slowly raise the bridge manually!” He made his way over towards what looked to be a simple crank connecting a rope to the front of the bridge… despite the obvious injury.
Narrative decisions and continuity notwithstanding, it was clear now what we had to do.
“Raise the drawbridge as fast as you can before the hoards of evil arrive! Following that, you may safely lower the drawbridges once more to continue on your adventure!”
I placed my hands on the crank with a certain level of wariness, planting my feet firmly on the ground, even going so far as to dig into it.
Auris did much of the same, and with one final look at one another, we began cranking it.
I was immediately met with resistance I wasn’t prepared for, the crank feeling stiff and unwieldy in my hands, as if the entire mechanism was locked up.
I knew, however, that this was simply a power calibration issue.
As I turned to the EVI and quickly began changing up the suit’s variable settings.
“Temporarily disable current profile, smart auto-adjust for me, EVI.” I barked out, as I felt the gummy resistance suddenly loosening up, and the crank in front of me turning from an impossible-to-turn steel rod, into a relatively simple oversized fishing reel.
Each hard-fought rotation coincided with the raising of the bridge in front of us, as inch by inch, the bridge was raised up higher and higher, with the approaching ‘evil hoards’ pausing as if waiting for us to fully raise the bridge before marching forwards.
It was like they were waiting for a quicktime event or for us to fulfill this particular action before continuing.
Which made sense.
As if they’d kept approaching, they’d have effectively acted as a sort of a ‘timer’ for this whole station.
It was another layer of added difficulty that simply wasn’t applied for our run, which I was thankful for, because this thing took a considerable amount of effort to get rolling.
Auris was really giving it his all now, managing to just about match my pace, as it took us about a full minute to raise the bridge up about half way.
The whole thing was more mind numbing and torturous than anything, and that pattern would’ve continued, if it wasn’t for the arrival of Auris’ favorite variable.
The crowds had arrived just in time to witness our silent efforts, as nothing else was heard outside of the rattling of chains and the CLACK CLACK CLACK of the primitive mechanisms.
So enrapturing was the fierce but otherwise silent competition, that none took their places at their own respective drawbridges.
Instead, everyone simply elected to watch, even Thalmin, as his eyes grew wide at my efforts.
Things were progressing smoothly enough. However, the moment Auris noticed the arrival of the crowds, so too did he start to truly rev things up, to the tune of about ten mana radiation warnings, a clear indicator that he was really pushing above and beyond now.
“Go on, Lord Ping! Show the newrealmer what a real magic user can do!”
The CLACK CLACK CLACKs of his chains increased in frequency, prompting me to match it tit for tat.
“Do not hold back now! Remember your promises!”
So heightened was his pace now that the rest of the drawbridge’s distance was closed in barely half a minute, as the bear returned, alongside the snarky remarks of the crowd.
“I am sure he was holding back!”
“True, true! No doubt toying with the newrealmer!”
“Excellent work, adventurers!” The bears spoke, breaking through the whispers of the crowd, as the ‘evil army’ consisting of nondescript clay mannequins started falling into the void as if on cue. “The evil forces have fallen to their doom! The path forward is now clear! Please, proceed!” He gestured towards the drawbridge which had now reset, lowering back to its open configuration.
“Right, EVI, set presets back to D-5e.”
“Affirmative.”
Several bursts of mana radiation indicated that Ping was probably supercharging his run, poised to book it as quickly as his spells were complete.
So as soon as the suit recalibrated, I quickly sped off, the bull getting a bit of a head start as we both approached the bridge and—
“Initiating emergency stop.”
I skidded to a halt, just as my feet reached the very edge of the bridge.
“What the heck, EVI, what gives—”
“Analysis of material composition complete. Summary: the bridge is constructed of the same mana-based materials as the walls, Cadet Booker. The suit’s weight and movement will compromise its structural integrity.”
“Right.” I responded bluntly, testing the waters by stomping hard on part of the bridge, confirming the EVI’s analysis as a good chunk of it collapsed, falling into the void in the process. “We don’t have much time, calculate launch trajectory and give me a pathmap to follow.”
“Unable to comply, Cadet Booker. The chasm is too wide.” The EVI responded quickly, displaying all the possible arcs and trajectories it calculated, as each arc landed just short of the other side.
All, except for one.
“That one.” I ‘pointed’ using my eyes, selecting what looked to be yet another failed calculation, with a jump that led straight down into the cliff-face on the other side of the chasm. “EVI, are the cliff-faces also composed of the same material as the wall?”
“Affirmative.”
“Good. Now, just follow my lead…”
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The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1140
Auris
Had I truly done it?
A quick glance back towards the bridge showed the newrealmer once more stuck without a way forward.
A narrowing of my eyes showed exactly why this was the case.
Her sheer weight simply made it untenable for her to continue.
The muscle-bound nature of the beast had brought it to an untimely halt.
The consequences of its brutality was now made manifest as it was unable to use the instruments of civilization.
A humble bridge acting as the cage to its ambitions.
A smile crept up across my face, as I continued forward at a comfortable pace.
The newrealmer had backed up away from the bridge at this point, presumably with the intent to drop out of the competition.
Relief finally came to wash over my haggard soul.
But that relief was short lived.
As not a second after I restarted my run, did the audible KA-THUNK KA-THUNK KA-THUNKs start once again.
And as I craned my head backwards, I was met with the metal behemoth surging forward at ridiculous speeds.
This all culminated in a leap.
One that elicited several ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd.
My mind anticipated the loud THUD of her landing on the other side of the chasm.
However, my eyes instead were faced with the hilarity of the beast landing just short of the track, falling comically into the endless void below.
I couldn’t help but to laugh audibly at that.
I took a good few seconds to allow unfettered joy to reverberate through the crowds to the horrified expressions of the scant few that supported the beast.
And after a good few more moments, relishing the situation, I left.
A comfortable jog was accompanied by the sounds of the other drawbridges being raised and lowered.
I was once more in my element, the castle coming up closer by the second.
Until suddenly, I heard it.
crunch.
Crunch.
CRUNCH.
I felt a tingling running up and down my spine.
My fur threatened to stand up on edge again beneath the academy-issued sports attire.
My neck felt stiff, yet my mind urged me to crane back towards the chasm.
And so I did.
As a single oddity caught my eye.
It was a single hand, then two, then a helmeted head; pulling itself up and out of the chasm against the sheer cliff face that bordered it.
Its glowing red eyes once more met my own.
I froze.
Then… I ran.
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The Transgracian Academy for the Magical Arts. The Hall of Champions. Competitor’s Field. Local Time: 1145
Emma
I pulled myself up with a bit of effort, arriving yet again right on time to witness Ping’s look of abject fear, and a sprint seemingly born out of sheer panic.
Satisfaction, cockiness, and a whole host of feelings started to emerge.
But I didn’t have time to dwell on that however, as the castle loomed just a click or so in front of me.
So I ran, catching up to ping in just under a minute, as we once more competed silently, interrupted occasionally by the cheers for his victory from the spectator stands.
It took just under another minute before we arrived at the castle, at which point, we entered straight through a pair of large oak doors, leading straight into a throne room.
It… really was a miniature castle, but at least it got us straight to the point.
As we were met with a literal creature of shadow hidden beneath a cloak, sitting atop of the solid-gold throne.
“WELL WELL WELL, WHATEVER DO WE HAVE HERE?!” A strangely familiar voice boomed out from beneath the cloak of shadows. “Do I see TWO challengers now?” He continued, as the EVI brought up a nametag that I wasn’t surprised to see.
It would’ve been him of all people, to have volunteered to act, wouldn’t it?
“Yes, we’re here to free the kingdom, now please tell us the challenge so we can get this over with—”
“SILENCE! Ye who wishes to free this kingdom must beat me in a challenge!”
“That’s what I just said—”
“SILENCE!” He reiterated, causing the whole room to rumble. “Now, your challenge… is to beat me… in a competition of pure strength!” The ‘evil king’ stood up, walking towards a table with several chairs around it in the middle of the throne room. “You must beat me… in a feat of simple, yet focused strength.” He sat down, placing an arm atop of the table, raising in a move that I didn’t want to acknowledge. “You must wrestle this kingdom from my hands by force.” He announced, as stormy winds coupled with echoey thunder began swirling around the room for dramatic effect.
“So, arm wrestling.” I managed out dryly.
The dramatics died down for a moment after I said that.
“That is the commoner term for it, yes.” He nodded.
This prompted me to turn towards something else in the corner of the room, seemingly forgotten.
It was the sword in the stone, used now as mere set dressing.
“I’d rather we have a rematch of the sword-in-the-stone challenge rather than just some arm wrestling—”
"That is my trophy for having defeated the hero of this land! It is a signifier of my almightiness! For if I am able to procure the sword, surely the strength of my arm must be superior to its challenge, no?”
It was at this point that Auris and I locked eyes in disbelief, before turning back towards the ‘king’ with a sigh.
“I accept your challenge.” We spoke at the same time, sitting down across from the ‘king’.
“Since you arrived here at the same time, the one who defeats me quickest will be the one true victor. So, how about you start, my dear dashing Lord of righteousness?”
Ping nodded with a stoic look of confidence, as he gripped the apprentice’s hand tightly, poised to break it.
“On the count of three, then!” The apprentice spoke, prompting the bull to nod once in reply.
“One.”
Both arms clenched.
“Two.”
Ping breathed in deeply.
“Three!”
The EVI was inundated with a surge of mana radiation signatures, whilst the scene in front of me remained seemingly unchanged, save for the increased intensity and death-glares made by either party.
“Withdraw now, and I will grant you clemency—”
“Shut. Up!” Ping roared.
Soon enough, I could hear as the table began shaking, its stone foundations cracking, as the apprentice struggled to hold his ground, kicking his legs, before finally…
THWACK!
The apprentice’s hand was pushed aggressively down onto the table, generating a massive gust of wind, clearly done for dramatic effect.
“Ouch.” The apprentice managed out, immediately using his good hand to heal what looked to be a pretty nasty bruise in a matter of seconds. “Congratulations, Lord Ping! You have completed this final challenge in forty three seconds!”
Ping stood up with a confident grin plastered across his face following that, as he made his way out of the castle, towards a crowd of cheering onlookers.
I moved to place my arm on the table without uttering a word, as the mechanical surrogate ‘hand’ clutched the apprentice’s hand tightly.
Haptic feedback was useful in these instances, but I’d purposefully dulled it a bit for what was to come.
“On the count of three, adventurer!” He began, getting back into character, prompting me to turn towards the EVI internally.
“EVI, guestimate the force of Ping’s match, and try to match it.”
“Insufficient data.”
“One.”
He breathed in deep.
“Just do your best, we’ll auto-adjust as we go along.”
“Acknowledged.”
“Two.”
I kept myself poised, gripping his hand tight, probably too tight given how he flinched right before—
“THREE!”
He pushed hard, harder than any human could, as the EVI’s force calculators quickly brought us back into equilibrium.
However, just as we did so, so too did the apprentice’s surges in mana increase the force applied, prompting the EVI to correct our course, pushing a bit harder this time, resulting in—
SLAM!
My heart dropped as I could just about feel the sheer force applied to that hand.
Thankfully, I did not hear nor feel anything snap or break.
It was just the suddenness of it all that got to me.
“Ow…” The man muttered out in a high pitched voice, immediately gesturing for me to get up as he tended to his bruised hand with several surges of mana radiation this time around.
“I hereby declare Cadet Emma Booker, at five seconds, to be the victor…” He squealed out, before putting up a sign saying ‘Please Wait For Your Turn’ for the upcoming contestants.
I walked out, unable to really comprehend what I just accomplished, until finally, I was met with Chiska at the front gates of the castle.
The look on her face was one of shock, which quickly turned to an excitable smile as she locked eyes with me. “Well, well, well, Cadet Booker. It looks like you just earned yourself a place in the history books.”
“Wait, really?”
“Well, my history books that is.” She grinned. “For whatever that’s worth.”
It was around that point that she gestured for Ping to join us, as we both walked out of the castle together, much to the expectant gazes of the crowds.
“First years! I am happy to announce the victor of this impromptu challenge!” She paused for dramatic effect, as those in the stands were clearly more hooked than even the challengers on the track. “May I present to you, the victor, Cadet Emma Booker of Earthrealm!”
A collective silence followed suit, before being met with a sizable uproar.
Ladona was on hand to urge several boos from the track.
Meanwhile, Thacea, Ilunor, and Thalmin attempted to break through the overwhelming response with cheers of their own, though subtle.
However, just as quickly as the spirit of unsportsmanlike behavior arise, so too did I abide by my own code of conduct, as I reached out a hand to Ping in an unexpected display that prompted both cheers and boos to die down.
“Good game.”
Comments
I thought the wall was going to be a kool-aid type moment. Which made me think of a future scene that could play out. (I was watching said video as i thought it.) I think it would be hilarious was if Emma was drawing one day and as inspiration she used the video called “everybody say YIPPEE YO, YIPPEE YAY!!!” ’s 3 panel animation of a pony. Specifically for the three friendliest in the main group to be ponies with their respective heads and ilunor to be a drawn as a football head to be punted.
Salvatore Page
2024-08-03 11:39:07 +0000 UTCim willing to allow for some gene mods, 100 is "mid life" age for them approximately
Michael Halpern
2024-08-01 22:52:58 +0000 UTCTo add onto this, the theoretical maximum speed a human could run at and tolerate is around 35-40 mph, which is around 64 kph. Around that speed our knees would probably literally blow out. While this is mitigated with power armor, it is something to keep in mind.
Alexander Leith
2024-08-01 15:43:05 +0000 UTCNah... if we get it, it's gonna be pure gibberish wirh how shorted out his brain will be
Ragnar Pendon
2024-07-31 20:17:31 +0000 UTCThey rewrote that part in the previous chapter, check it out. It implies the walls were about as strong as a residential home. The outcroppings were probably sand bound with pure mana, which the suit just passes through unscathed, hence the crumbling. Since that mana couldn't hold her back, she could push through the wall as easy as a non-mana-enhanced wall.
Spencer
2024-07-31 16:20:28 +0000 UTC" walked out, unable to really comprehend what I just accomplished, until finally, I was met with Chiska at the front gates of the castle. The look on her face was one of shock, which quickly turned to an excitable smile as she locked eyes with me. “Well, well, well, Cadet Booker. It looks like you just earned yourself a place in the history books.”" Definitely new favorite student, I bet she'll accept the Flight pack module as qualifying as "sports attire"
Michael Halpern
2024-07-31 14:58:52 +0000 UTCthere's still an upper limit for the other students, either by their capacity for mana manipulation or their reaction time, If Chiska's reaction time is anything like a normal cat, she'd be well past the upper limit for most students
Michael Halpern
2024-07-31 12:49:36 +0000 UTCwell you can probably overwhelm it with enough concentrated mana, or in vacuum, most likely way for it to work given mana sight POVs is that it traps mana and radiates the energy away as heat. it clearly does this faster than the ambient mana gets absorbed,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-31 12:45:23 +0000 UTCfairly easy to explain either in headcanon or in the actual fic.... the stuff in the castle scenario is a hard light projection and by extension every energy spell that you can throw at her are light beams if you imagine her armor as something like vantablack, you won't see the effects of light on it cuz it'll suck it all in, ergo, pure mana spells won't have an [observable] effect you need something solid/real to actually affect her armor like Maltory's soft ground trap and Thacea's chairs
Ragnar Pendon
2024-07-31 12:24:32 +0000 UTCAhhh GG Auris is so gonna seeth
Ragnar Pendon
2024-07-31 04:06:05 +0000 UTCAnd our first year students are probably not masters of personal enhancement magic yet.
Allen Mainville
2024-07-31 03:26:24 +0000 UTCsome tanks can go highway speeds,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-31 00:32:36 +0000 UTCI would go with Radar Absorbant Material as a better analogy, to mana site, she is a "void" just like an aircraft covered in RAM would be to radar,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-30 21:37:39 +0000 UTCno it doesn't neutralize magic magic just can't directly interact with it, the magic binding agent is using magic to directly hold the structures together AND adjust to force it can detect, this is needed to reduce mana cost to reasonable levels, however it can't adjust to Emma's suit because it can't "see" it.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-30 21:35:38 +0000 UTCNah, cause her armor doesnt nullify per-se. Its shielding, and its made of material that isnt imbedded with magic. Its why the black robbed frakker had to use the surrounding environment. Think neutrons.
Delsin Hays
2024-07-30 20:28:06 +0000 UTCWilling to actually do PE.
I Dare Korval
2024-07-30 19:54:05 +0000 UTCI'm fairly certain contact with Emma's suit canceling out the magic in things flies in the face of previously established events, like Thacea using magic to strengthen the chair Emma was sitting on when they first met. Maybe if the binding agent strengthened itself in response to mana it detected, it would make sense, since it wouldn't be able to see Emma?
Gregory Sampson
2024-07-30 19:19:19 +0000 UTCSoon Emma: Would you like to know MORE?
Michael Halpern
2024-07-30 17:48:17 +0000 UTCPing after offered handshake: error does not compute. seriously his ENTIRE thing is based on the assumption that being from a manaless newrealm, Emma must be a savage, uncivilized beast, yet here she is, after having won, clearly showing civilty and respect, both of those things can't be true at the same time, especially with how spontaneously she did it.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-30 16:07:31 +0000 UTCEmma just played THE winning move here, possibly without even really thinking about it. Ping's whole thing is beating the uncivilized,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-30 10:27:25 +0000 UTCmore that they are a society that depends on scarcity as a means of power, and Earthrealm is a post scarcity society.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 16:21:29 +0000 UTCOh hell ya! Loved the back and forth perspectives! Really brought the competition home! Amazing chapter!
Tazeell
2024-07-29 15:07:32 +0000 UTCYes-ish. They would know what happened to the previous earthrealmer, but like most of the students would likely assume that Earth is just very mana deficient, not completely lacking mana. You have to remember it's part of their fundamental belief that mana is necessary for life. They would likely assume that the previous Earthrealmer was just overwhelmed by the quantity of mana, not that they couldn't tolerate mana at all. Setting all of that aside it's become clear that NONE of them have really grasped what science is capable of achieving, most likely not even the highest ranked in the Nexus. They have some inkling that Earth has capabilities much greater than expected, but no real concept of how much greater. From their perspective it would be like us discovering that single celled amoebas had managed to construct a dyson sphere.
Gabu
2024-07-29 14:37:07 +0000 UTCQiv would benefit from private inquiry
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 13:33:53 +0000 UTCNow hold up don't the professors know (to some extent) that earth is manaless and what happened to the previous earthrealmer. A prospective from chiska with that in mind would be exciting
Cosmic BGM
2024-07-29 13:32:56 +0000 UTCThe "cheating angle" is needed for the benefit of future classes,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 13:31:52 +0000 UTCno the Apprentice's spell worked through a physical medium, his arm, and as a test its supposed to be beatable the armor just adjusted too quickly.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 13:29:49 +0000 UTCHe proceeded to look at his hand for several minutes questioning if he activated the magic properly or if he messed up somehow. Only brought back to reality when a new challenger approaches. (The second guessing leads to ping being the slowest time)
Cosmic BGM
2024-07-29 13:28:15 +0000 UTCQiv: I do not what is worse: the new realmer being this physically capable, or the implications of manaless ways to improve your abilities. I shall believe she is just that capable for now for fear of the inquisition. Ping: OH god Oh f*** OH s***, keep this demon away! I don't want to be hunted like an animal!
Cosmic BGM
2024-07-29 13:25:02 +0000 UTC30kph is about the speed of a modern tank so it does track I think Emma would be just faster. Considering how compact the suit is to a tank 30 seems fair enough, keep in mind she also didn't go her upper limit speed either adjusting as needed.
Cosmic BGM
2024-07-29 13:21:36 +0000 UTCThe 2000m world record is 4:43.13, so literally twice as fast as peak human performance.
SoylentPudding
2024-07-29 13:16:36 +0000 UTCThis is probably also why Emma won arm wrestling so decisively, the apprentice's spell didn't detect any manna to power up against.
SoylentPudding
2024-07-29 13:08:10 +0000 UTCEmma will have to mention her "sports equipment" for air sports at some point
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 12:16:26 +0000 UTCthe mana binder likely adapts to whatever force is applied to it, to reduce mana cost of holding the material together, however the part of the spell that determines how much force is needed doesn't work on the armor because it can't detect it, not directly.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 12:06:13 +0000 UTCyup the whole set is self building and likely self healing, so as a temporary structure using mana to directly hold it together would normally be good enough. However it's probably more that mana can't interact (directly) with the armor this is how Emma was able to climb and dig through the cliff, the material underneath what she disturbed was being held together just fine, but that which her armor was contacting directly couldn't counter the force it couldn't sense
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 12:04:01 +0000 UTCdefinitely a new favorite student, Fiercely competitive, capable of backing her claims, and sportsmanlike.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 10:50:01 +0000 UTCIt's likely that the wall is held together by mana fields. And just like when Thacea tried to create a sitting surface, the armor (and its contents) just doesn't exist to the mana fields.
Darren Stalder
2024-07-29 10:28:11 +0000 UTCshe's not allowed to explain anything for Her own benefit, but explaining how to identify if she's using the armor enhancement is to her detriment
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 08:17:52 +0000 UTCBookie gets a cut lol
Dale
2024-07-29 07:19:54 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure she just found her new favorite student lol
UC-79
2024-07-29 05:12:26 +0000 UTCShe may not be allowed to explain it. The most she could do is say the first part was just her own natural strength, and let them wonder about the rest.
I Dare Korval
2024-07-29 05:08:07 +0000 UTCShe didn't seem to have any problems or she would not have announced Emma as the winner.
I Dare Korval
2024-07-29 05:04:59 +0000 UTCI commented on this but I kind of hope that gets retconned. Having her armor not just block but actually negate magic is a whole can of worms.
Gabu
2024-07-29 03:45:41 +0000 UTCFrom the perspective of Chiska. Thalmin and the others already have some inkling of what she's capable of, but Chiska is both smart and just beginning to get some kind of baseline of what not just Emma but all the students are capable of. Remember this is the first class so she's likely to be analyzing all the students closely to get some idea of what the rest of the school year is going to need to look like.
Gabu
2024-07-29 03:42:40 +0000 UTCSo, I'm somewhat confused by something. The last chapter at least somewhat implied that her armor doesn't just block magic but actually negates it. I say this because the wall was composed of "sparse matter" held together by magic, and EVI hypothesized that the innate nature of the armor caused it to crumble on contact. This to me indicates that the armor was negating the binding magic. If that's the case it implies certain things that are likely to become problematic from a story telling perspective. It might be better to clarify that she was able to dig through these materials due to them simply not being very strong relative to her armor rather than implying they're crumbling because her armor is nullifying magic it comes into contact with.
Gabu
2024-07-29 03:38:04 +0000 UTCShopping episode!!
David
2024-07-29 03:34:05 +0000 UTCThe cheating angle was already explored, and I don't think Auris will want a rematch right now. It'll have to be other arguments for why "Emma is stupid and savage and she stinks" than that.
Skrzynek
2024-07-29 03:18:42 +0000 UTCI am honestly surprised anyone can *touch* her armor without discomfort given it seems to nullify mana.
Lorventus
2024-07-29 03:18:22 +0000 UTCSo Auris first cranks the drawbridge halfway up in a minute, and then (after encouragement) speeds up TWOFOLD to raise it fully in HALF a minute. Emma matches him tit-for-tat. Meaning that she could have always raised the drawbrighe 0% to 100% in a single minute or less... But chose not to. Ergo - those with good perception for such things, like Thalmin or Chiska, may notice that Emma won while still holding back to an unknown degree. The implication of that is probably quite shocking and/or terrifying, and I'd LOVE to see a piece of the next chapter from the perspective of either of them!
Skrzynek
2024-07-29 03:17:14 +0000 UTCI mean I'm gonna a give them leeway on this, mostly because most writers rely on rule of cool. 2 minutes to go a KM? Sounds unmanageable for me! Good enough!
Lorventus
2024-07-29 03:16:40 +0000 UTCI mean, Jcb put freaking Gummigoo in the story. They are pure meme lord.
Lorventus
2024-07-29 03:14:01 +0000 UTCSomething along the lines. Or that the fact she offered a hand means she views him as such a non challenge that it would be beneath her to gloat
Medical-Cyanide
2024-07-29 03:04:09 +0000 UTC"Only a fool doesn't gloat when they have won!" Or something dystopian like that, ay?
Skrzynek
2024-07-29 03:02:55 +0000 UTCnot over yet, she still has to settle for the class a way to tell she isn't cheating on the unenhanced challenges, like the noise her armor makes when it is enhancing her strength
Michael Halpern
2024-07-29 00:54:38 +0000 UTCA satisfying conclusion to gym class. I feel bad for my impatient comment on the WIP since I know this could be even greater with more time, but… damn, I loved the shifting perspectives. The storytelling of others seeing Emma break through walls, leap across chasms and climb, all without mana. Just a beautiful experience. I can’t wait to see the aftermath. I am excited also to get to the rest of the story
Tainted_But_Thriving
2024-07-29 00:45:25 +0000 UTC"Took an arrow to the knee."
EclipseDragon96
2024-07-28 23:42:39 +0000 UTCI think its more world breaking than that, this is Emma being civil to him, despite how uncivil he has been to her, and more than that being the most civil person in the room in that moment despite having won. She can't be that and also be savage
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 23:31:07 +0000 UTCCan't downplay any of it as uncivilized when she offers the handshake and says "good game" even if that isn't part of Nexian tradition, the intent and delivery are very clear, a return to civilty once the game is done.
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 23:28:25 +0000 UTCCant believe they did my boy dirty like that, hope the apprentice wasnt in too much pain afterwards
Remi
2024-07-28 23:25:36 +0000 UTCThis was the shadow apprentice, not the theatre kid
Legijas
2024-07-28 22:10:31 +0000 UTCremember not at max settings so those with histile intent can still be surprised
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 21:44:17 +0000 UTCcan't believe i missed that
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 21:39:26 +0000 UTCMath police here. 1 km in 2 minutes would be 30 kph Which still seems a bit slow to me, but over the distances covered, might make sense?
Jade Felicity Bilkey
2024-07-28 21:38:15 +0000 UTCoh im sure she'll have a few words to say.. excitedly
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 21:34:55 +0000 UTCnot quite, he's more afraid of where his curiosity will bring him and the Inquisition
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 21:17:16 +0000 UTCAuris: this is a battle ground, the integirty of the eternal truths are at stake! My eternal soul has ben tested and found lacking! Who is this vile beast that shall descerate the holy santctity of his enlightened regime! Ema: Hey good game dude.
Blake S
2024-07-28 21:07:40 +0000 UTCThis time around: Qiv starting to develop anthropogenic dread and Ping suffering from cultural trauma
Willow Arkan
2024-07-28 21:05:28 +0000 UTCEve took that head bonk a few chapters back personally
Blake S
2024-07-28 21:04:25 +0000 UTCSounds a bit too like anthropomorphising of the EVI, my guess it was just overcompensating for the increase in strength and didn't account for how long the other side would need to match.
Willow Arkan
2024-07-28 21:02:26 +0000 UTCMostly agree, though from the text it seems more like the powerarm first encountered the initial magic augmented strength of the apprentice, purposely matched it, which in turn caused the apprentice or his spell to increase the spell strength, so anticipating a further escalation the second power increase was in excess of the current counterforce and potentially even its expected further increase as just experienced, at which point the spell either couldn't compensate fast enough or, which is my guess, the apprentice's processing speed couldn't process and channel more magic before a loss occurred. So in essence I don't see a necessary longer back and forth between spell and powerarmor.
Willow Arkan
2024-07-28 21:00:00 +0000 UTCProceeds to punch ema and then breaks his hand
Blake S
2024-07-28 20:57:40 +0000 UTCHmm. Potentially offering ping the chance to save face. However it is entirely possible due to nexian BS that this could hinder Emma further. I don’t think it will but it’s still possible
Medical-Cyanide
2024-07-28 20:40:49 +0000 UTCI think just under just under 2 minutes to run one kilometer to reach the castle might be a bit slow for power armor and magically enhanced speed. That would probably be around 7-9 kph depending on how far "about a click or so" and how long "just under a minute" is.
Zaxus Lanterus
2024-07-28 20:31:55 +0000 UTCChiska pov would be great Watching the " mana deficient newrealmer" fail to climb an obstacle, and instead of giving up emma decides that the walls were just a suggestion
UC-79
2024-07-28 19:45:28 +0000 UTCWell, Thalmin was the only one that bet on Emma (that we have seen in writing) so it's technically him that should be getting all the money. And with his character he's either giving it all to Emma or everything but the ten gold he bet.
Legijas
2024-07-28 19:44:31 +0000 UTCAn arrow to the knee? Really, are we not above such.... What was that? ... Must've been the wind.
Klembit
2024-07-28 19:38:16 +0000 UTCOh please let Emma use game etiquette on him
MaybeASquid
2024-07-28 18:40:50 +0000 UTCthe Dean's apprentice is already there,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:39:58 +0000 UTCWhich, in turn, would either circumvent the Dean's gag order, or prompt the Dean to answer for Emma by arriving (or having someone arrive) and stop her from saying anything at all, both of which are positives for Emma
Venidlara
2024-07-28 18:32:12 +0000 UTCshe could state as much without explaining HOW it does it for the benefit of class so they know if she is being enhanced or not, not for her own personal gain, just the opposite really as it gives them a way to identify if she's cheating in the unenhanced challenges
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:27:10 +0000 UTCIt reads and feels more like EVI "auto-adjusted" at a computer's pace, reacting to each detected increase of strength by ramping up to match and then slightly overcome it, causing the spell to then ramp itself up, lather rinse and repeat, until the spell reached its upper limit. The final auto-adjust matches and then beats the spell faster than any organic mind can react, hence why both the apprentice and Emma were surprised by the outcome. Ping takes all that extra time because this test likely requires the student to manually expend mana each and every time they have to ramp up their strength to match, which he does, but at the pace of an organic (and a freshman; I wouldn't be surprised if that sort of automatic power escalation is taught at higher grades). Emma's take would therefore be incredibly unusual because her apparent mana-less adaptation matched the pace of the apprentice's spell.
Pyrion
2024-07-28 18:23:19 +0000 UTCI need pings pov next 100%
Harrison Crandall
2024-07-28 18:23:04 +0000 UTCWhile the armor (in high performance mode) is much noisier, I don't think anyone outside of their group of Misfits would be able to even think about the idea of nonmagical armor being able to assist the wearer.
evillittleweirdguy
2024-07-28 18:22:30 +0000 UTCoh he'll probably compound his loss by not accepting the handshake and reciprocating, the rules mentioned sportsmanship at least once,
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:22:10 +0000 UTCEVI seems to have auto adjust kick in, in those situations uncommanded, remember the signing
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:19:07 +0000 UTCAuto-adjust in response might actually be useful if Auris does that annoying alpha male thing of crushing the other's hand to assert superiority. He'd have a hard time crushing the armor, sure, but if the effort is being made, Emma really oughta reciprocate. If only for the sake of consistency.
Pyrion
2024-07-28 18:16:35 +0000 UTCactually thinking about it they DO have a way to know when she's enhanced, the pneumatics are audible
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:10:48 +0000 UTCEmma should restore to defaults before the handshake. Auto adjust may take care of it, but rather not risk a gesture of sportsmanship inflicting injury
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 18:10:02 +0000 UTCPing is going to have to accept, either he accepts her handshake and accepts that a 'beast' is better then him, or violate decorum and make himself dishonorable seeming.
Nul Atlas
2024-07-28 18:06:43 +0000 UTCNow it is Ping's time to respond. Will he be a good sport, even if he doesn't want to, or will he be a arrogant as he has always been?
HiMyNameIsFelipe
2024-07-28 18:03:05 +0000 UTCThe scene where Emma was running out the smoke full speed at Auris had me think of that one scene in Astartes where the Marines were running fullspeed at the 2 psychers lmao
Weed Pigeon
2024-07-28 18:02:35 +0000 UTCSo either we find out how much of a lolcow Ping is, or he just faints from a mental bsod.
Pyrion
2024-07-28 17:57:23 +0000 UTCThalmin is the one who put the bet for Emma in
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 17:50:12 +0000 UTCtrue but they noticed the discrepancy and Chiska likely would have to ask about it for the sake of the class
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 17:49:42 +0000 UTCSo none of the participants actually have a verifiable way of confirming Emma's baseline ability one way or the other. Either she's just Built Different and did everything without mana (and therefore insulted auris by pretending to be less capable in the manaless competition) or she was augmented in a way that no-one else there understands, and no-one can confirm that she was initially un-augmented. Anyway, illunor will be happy with his newly overflowing bag of gold.
evillittleweirdguy
2024-07-28 17:48:15 +0000 UTCI do hope we get see what ping is think after this loss
Shotgun Crusader
2024-07-28 17:44:25 +0000 UTCI'm hopeful that Ping will be horrified of the implication that this was a simple game for her when he was giving it his all.
GunpowderCoffee
2024-07-28 17:43:33 +0000 UTCOh that handshake is a no win for ping. Take it and he acknowledges a commoner as on his level, reject it and he's an arrogant ass for picking a fight and being mad he lost. I wouldn't be surprised if he losses his temper and goes for violence.
Canpinter
2024-07-28 17:42:36 +0000 UTCIt's refreshing to see the "Endurance hunter" thing turned into a horror story every time I see it. But it actually being folklore for the eternal hunt, or however they want to call it is really fun. Can't downplay it as unciviliced barbarism when the endurance hunter just dug their way through a few meters of brick and mortar in the same time you were running accross it.
GunpowderCoffee
2024-07-28 17:41:35 +0000 UTCThe group is prolly gonna give the moneyz to Emma so that she can buy stuff with local currency during the town shopping trip
Skrzynek
2024-07-28 17:40:51 +0000 UTC"so too did I feel a disturbance in the manastreams." I see what you did here :)
Kaiser
2024-07-28 17:40:06 +0000 UTCI'll just be waiting for next week to learn Emma's professionalism to have suggested something like a middle finger to Ping. Someone is walking away from this offended, methinks.
Matthew Speltz
2024-07-28 17:36:38 +0000 UTCUnless he sabotages himself on accident, then all he deserves is a single "bruh."
Pyrion
2024-07-28 17:36:14 +0000 UTCGG EZ
ThomasMC
2024-07-28 17:36:06 +0000 UTCEmma's a true gamer. You always say GG WP even if they other guys is a toxic POS
Ciberj1
2024-07-28 17:33:55 +0000 UTCI suspect the author enjoyed terrifying Auris like that. Still glad that Emma won and Illunor gets the payout.
Ebondragon
2024-07-28 17:33:07 +0000 UTC"bg" -Auris, probably
zmessing11
2024-07-28 17:33:00 +0000 UTCgg no re, skill issue. bovine oaf!
Logos
2024-07-28 17:32:19 +0000 UTCAnd that will throw many of them for a loop
Michael Halpern
2024-07-28 17:31:59 +0000 UTCThe only fitting thing to do, Emma. Congratulations. Give him a good handshake.
ArdenW
2024-07-28 17:31:43 +0000 UTCwould be pretty funny if the elf version of supernormal stimulus was humans. half elves for everyone
Gray
2024-07-28 17:31:40 +0000 UTCI thought they were about to face eachother lmaoo
PrivatePershing
2024-07-28 17:29:32 +0000 UTCSomehow I feel good sportsmanship is effectively rubbing salt in the wound and he's going to be forced to shake or make himself look bad. Also, why do I have the feeling EVI purposely overdid the compensation in the arm wrestling to totally blow Ping out of the competition? I think it may be starting to develop a personality. Keep up the good work!
I Dare Korval
2024-07-28 17:28:36 +0000 UTCShe probably mortally insulted him with this gesture, broke about a dozen rules, and in the process declared war on his kingdom.
Mech Bagienny
2024-07-28 17:27:27 +0000 UTC"gg no re, get better scrub" And when he invariably loses his shit, "sounds like a skill issue."
Pyrion
2024-07-28 17:27:14 +0000 UTCGG no re.
Gamerdestiny6
2024-07-28 17:26:59 +0000 UTC"Gg Ping, git gud next time"
ethan
2024-07-28 17:25:57 +0000 UTCGood game, that is a phrase that will cause Auris to completely lose it.
Arlen Verl Duncan III
2024-07-28 17:24:56 +0000 UTCYay time to read
Evaisa
2024-07-28 17:14:17 +0000 UTC