Savage Page 2
Added 2023-03-05 14:21:51 +0000 UTCThank you so much guys for supporting me in this project, I confess that this page scares me a little because it puts so many new elements for me, the main one is the dialogue, if I have written a phrase translated wrong or that I cannot understand in the phrase you can tell me that I will be correcting it.
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Thanks for the tip and you can point out the errors, yes, I'm very open to criticism, I already made the correction, I hope it got better *-*
Wevemos
2023-03-07 22:49:47 +0000 UTCRogério, taking drinks from mysterious strangers huh? Good thing he has no lasting effects at all : P If you don't mind there are a few places where the words sound awkward. "So how was it last night?" "I was a little uncomfortable" "Wow, you, drinking alcohol? I don't believe what I'm hearing!" "I just remember waking up with a big headache!" "That's a hangover my friend." "My wife called.. and you know how my relationship is with her." "Yes it is! I'm almost done." (or finished)
PuerFugax
2023-03-07 09:02:04 +0000 UTC
