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[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.124 "Party of Three"

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[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.124 "Party of Three"

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My heart broke a little. 🫢😭

Ciel Vestal

I think the progression of the story is great. Everyone in the comments saying it is different than the beginning - OF COURSE IT IS. You met 2 people on a plane and got to see a meet cute in a pressure cooker of a situation where everything is intensified- location, short timing, etc.. All you see are small facets of these people. Then the story progresses and these dynamic people have flaws because they’re humans and they do shitty stuff and you don’t like them anymore? 😂 Jui you rock - love the story - characters are awesome and I think they are really thought out with flaws and idiosyncrasies like real life people have . I find it always feels forced and rushed when people fall in love instantly. I think they had a great spark on the plane and I think the boys are starting to love each other and are getting there but it’s still too early. This is a better story because it’s not wash, rinse and repeat. - meet, fall in love, sex, end of story- but if that’s what you like then I understand this story maybe isn’t for you. JUI KEEP ROCKING IT 🥰🥰

Mrs. Franco

Idk … they need to talk to each other and I hope they ditch the third wheel :( I hope their first time ain’t a 3 some :(

KaiyaValentine

I love these characters so much but i think I'm going to give myself a break from this anxiety filled story. Ill be back in a few months, i think. 😔

Mary Juárez

THIS STILL LEAVES ME AND NOW MY ROOMMATE GAGGING but now I got dang distracted looking at Nathan’s fine ass 😔

Kylie

I know, this story arc is miserable and not enjoyable to read. They don’t behave the same way they did the first season or so and it doesn’t really make sense. To be honest I think i’m gonna give up on it, which is a shame since I invested the time & money. All respect to Jui, it’s just kinda gone off the rails for me.

Jen

I really hope his first time isn’t in a threesome with a narcissistic artist and a guy who thinks he’s experienced… that’s just too sad and I’ll have to give up on this story.

TeenyMartini

This story started out so sweet and now it's just miserable. And not in a good way. I actually like miscommunication in romance stories when it's done right, it's one of the less abusive ways to include conflict in a love story. But this has been dragged out for far too many chapters, it's twisting the characters into people I don't like and above all I can't believe I've been paying for this for so long because up until now they were one of the more open and communicative couples I'd been seeing in comics like these. Ugh. I just hope this gets sorted in the next few chapters.

Natalie Samuels

I feel for all the heartfelt comments, but…… I just wanna see some dick rn🫠 come on boys, let’s get this shit startedddd AAAAND, as a veteran in bl stories, I just know what comes after this angst arch and baby Jui, IM WAITING FOR IT! I just know it’ll be good cause LOOK WHAT YOURE MAKING US GO TROUGH 😭😭😭😭

Vitoria Brecci

You don't want to have sex with me asap so I go and do it with someone else?! IRL that is the reddest flag out there. I don't sense maturity or any deeper feelings on Nathans side at this point. Andrew could speak up, but he's just really young and his insecuritiy is quite noticable, if Nathan would actually pay attention. I'd call it an a**hole move on his side.

☆Juno☆

That’s so sad… 😢

Apolline Mahillet

Okay so look. I went back and reread some chapters. Staring around 61/62. Andrew tells Nathan no sex for 3 to 5 dates. So what does Nathan do? He starts jerking off while sitting on Andrew’s legs… Nathan the next day(?) flat out asks if he’s Andrew’s first. And what does Andrew do? He lies to him (granted, out of embarrassment for being a virgin, but still)… Nathan keeps pushing boundaries but he probably expects Andrew to tell him if he’s crossing a line and Andrew goes along with it because he just really likes/wants Nathan; if Andrew wasn’t a virgin, they’d prolly have been going at it like rabbits since the plane. So even though I really wanna say Nathan is just being a little bitch right now, I understand mixed signals. I understand how frustrating they can be. And how painful they can be even if they’re not made with malicious intent. So 🤷🏼‍♀️ Let’s just hope Nathan uses his big boy brain and puts a stop to this madness. I think if the artist had left, Andrew might have told Nathan everything then and there

Jane Boggs

I'm hating this🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️ Andrew can barely get through oral and now we're jumping continents to 3some?!?! Hes going to have a panic attack, at least 1.

Pauline D

How?? Andrew can barely admit that he likes Nathan and is inexperienced

Pauline D

Nooooo my heart😭😭😭 Andrew come in man fix this but Nathan too what are you doing

Desiree Marshall

I would disagree. You NEVER know someone’s background and past. No one I know would say that is a walking red flag, and I am sad for you if that is your experience with people.

Michelle Moore

I think this is also a big thing for me, he is clearly so reluctant and I am really surprised to see Nathan so willing to steamroll Andrew like this.

Michelle Moore

This. We feel the same.

Michelle Moore

I have to be honest that I hate this so much. I know there’s a point to it and the art + story is good, threesomes are just not my thing at all. I forgot that Andrew is 7 years younger and now honestly I’m a lot more upset.

Michelle Moore

Again, there's the side of me who doesn't want this threesome AND THE OTHERSIDE SAYS YESSSS!!! LET'S GO!!!

Missbee

Ughhh so frustrating but make more lol 😂

Aixa Hernandez

Andrew....

Tea

Having said that, Andrew being seven years younger than Nathan does put the responsibility on Nathan to be gentler than he might have been with other hookups. Instead of taking Andrew’s seeming disinterest at face value, he should probably do some more digging before he writes Andrew off completely

Chance Pane

I have been getting sadder with every chapter that passes for a couple of months now. I love this story and the boys but I don’t know if I can continue to watch their plane go down. Miscommunication happens in adult relationships but I feel like Nathan should have noticed that something is up by now. I’m not saying he wouldn’t give up on Andrew like he is in this chapter I’m just saying I think this could’ve been an awkward unfinished conversation from 4 chapters ago. It makes me sad to see Andrew forced into a corner for a sense of drama or tension. Very real tension can exist in a world where they communicate but want different things. Edit: I just want to say this story has had a lot of cute moments and has brought me a lot of joy. That being said, red flag behavior is a standard for this genre which makes me sad. Sorry for the novel but Jui I really have loved these characters since I started reading at chapter 12’s release. I will continue to support and subscribe but wanted to share my thoughts.

TrubblMaker

Nah as someone around Nathan’s age, I kinda get it. I don’t like the way he’s doing it, but I get it. Sex is clearly make-or-break for him and Andrew’s giving him a lot of mixed signals instead of being direct with what he wants and likes. In the real world, most would have peaced out a while ago because someone not having a good grip on what they like and want sexually is a walking red flag in your late twenties

Chance Pane

The artist should not be with these two. Nathan’s a *barely* willing participant and Andrew is clearly only going to do it to get on Nathan’s good side. Not enthusiastic consent, my dude. Let these two idiots talk it out and go elsewhere

Chance Pane

oh noooooo andrewww

Kayoko_

lmao. EXACTLY the SAME thoughts!!! 💀

Stephanie Sands

I really struggle to word Nathen but his not the bad guy. His clueless in the dark with no intention of hurting him. He just doesn't get it. It gets to a point and stops he wants the person he cares for and it keeps going nowhere. It is hard 😔

GemmaLou

Dammit Andrew, no-one likes a simp! Tell him the TRUUUUTH!!!! (This is killing me!

Dj jRoc

That hit hard I said it out loud 😭

GemmaLou

What is Andrew getting himself into. I need a sec 😮‍💨. It's. So. Hard. Because Andrew has no idea what his doing to Nathan. And Nathan has no idea what this is doing to Andrew. I trust you I still have no idea how this will play out. His first time like this 😔. It hurts to think he can't talk about it it's just so hard for him. My heart goes out to him standing in the rain with his little fists watching Nathan walk away. Poor Nathan disappointed and frustrated. Leaving with someone he doesn't really like.

GemmaLou

wdym likeD???😭

xklr

You'll do anything and everything BUT USE YOUR WORDS. 😤

Levi Nightmore

This is 'uffda'.

Jake Dutton

😦😤😧😩😡😠😭😭😭 ugh. Andrew needs to tell Nathan he is his first!!!! Nathan should have clued in a long time ago

Tami O

What no. My hearts broken and I can’t even fathom words. First liked and now this threesome. Why don’t they just talk it out.

Dailyn Burks

For fucks sake Andrew just use your words. Nathan's right, this is tedious. It's gone beyond angst at this point, you're becoming less likeable as a character.

Cas Wanden

why are they so... ugh i guess that makes them realistic but the both of them are so STUPID like ugh why can't andrew tell the truth about his fears why can't nathan say the problem is not just having sex but not being allowed to create intimacy etc he sounds like someone who can't keep it in his pants he sounds selfish when he isn't that much really... ugh

m.

his first sexual experience this this should NOT be a yhreesome uGHHHHH

carley

“Liked”…?

Griffin

i feel so uncomfortable rn🥹

Di

“Liked” past tense? Damnnnnnn our poor babies 😭

lorem ipsum dolor

Ugh i hate the homeless looking guy. Worst character in this, making the cuteness of andrew and nathan go to shit

SlothAnime

Oh noooo, this isn’t good 😭 My boys need to community ASAP! I feel so bad for Andrew. His anxiety really is his worst enemy 🫠

Dev Louis

I’m sorry but Nathan is just being mean. Have a heart to heart, but don’t just leave with another guy like that. Ouch.

Liz Olson

Nathan is so wrong I can’t stand him right now 😤

Cassandra

Now I’m sad😭😭😭

Logan🇧🇸

*Picks jaw up from the floor* Damn, that escalated quickly. 👀🍿

Autumn

Andrew please just be honest 😭

Charley Pearce

😭😭😭😭😭 Oh Andrew, our sweet boy ❤️

Daria

Oh my dear Neptune…… I’m speechless…

Kara

The misunderstanding is killing me!!! Andrew! Tell him what you're thinking!

seaj


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