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I hope one day you’ll tell us your real name, and maybe even show us a photo!
2023-07-03 07:48:47 +0000 UTCTypo I noticed (since you said you were okay with pointing them out in a previous post) When talking about the salsa class in the beginning - “And kicking myself for never doing anything like until now” is missing “anything like *this*”
2023-06-15 16:55:57 +0000 UTCIt's such a relief that you found kindness after being in Elan. The best parts of this story have always been people who are willing to just listen to you without bullshit or pretense. Incidentally, I found a typo: -In the second paragraph after the girl comes to your apartment, you accidentally forgot the space in "do things".
2023-06-15 14:02:24 +0000 UTCPeople like Sofi are rare but I know firsthand they exist. One way to tell is seeing how many heads turn when they walk into a room. Whether they want to or not, that light of theirs can't help but shine - and it's not because of physical beauty, though that tends to run parallel. Instead it's something more like a deep kindness that just wants to find other people.
Benjamin Glover
2023-06-15 09:29:23 +0000 UTC"Sofi spent the night" aaaaaaa!!!! such a cute story. I really enjoyed this chapter - it felt so much happier (the number of times you use the word love!) and it really feels like you're starting to set down some of the burdens that you've had since Elan.
2023-06-14 22:14:34 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter!
DJ_Exidor
2023-06-14 22:07:31 +0000 UTC
