Story Revisions
Added 2017-09-16 16:56:26 +0000 UTCThis week I've been reviewing my script for the next comic, and realized I'll need to make a decision soon on a potential change to Candice's backstory. It's not a drastic change, and it will only impact the dialogue on one page of this comic. Still, that dialogue is an exchange I've had in mind for a couple of years. The new dialogue doesn't feel as comfortable yet, and I'll probably be tweaking it right up until I post that finished page. ...and the frustrating thing is I can't fully explain the change or why it's needed, without dumping a bunch of spoilers. Unless, perhaps, I limit those spoilers to top-tier patrons?
Comments
As a non-top-tier patron I also vote for them to work through the rewrite. They've earned it.
2017-09-16 21:33:49 +0000 UTCAs a top tier patron, I vote for anything that goes to us only. :P
David Haring
2017-09-16 18:33:00 +0000 UTCI vote Violet! I love that little nerd.
David Haring
2017-09-16 18:28:44 +0000 UTC...I might have to use that for an intermission, with either Violet or Rose putting the idea out there. :)
Jared Lindquist
2017-09-16 17:13:43 +0000 UTCIs this where we find out that she's an alien lizard person in a flesh suit?
Brian Christy Burke
2017-09-16 17:06:24 +0000 UTC
