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Lazy and lazier

Panel #2 is sketched out, meaning this page is now past the half-way point!

I thought I'd be lazy and save myself some time, and re-use Mercy from this panel in the final one...  but this morning I thought of a better solution!  The layout for the sixth/final panel wouldn't have worked - Rose's head would've taken up much of the foreground.  Now I'm thinking the final panel should be over Mercy's shoulder, almost a reverse-angle from this one.


The planned fourth & fifth panels felt tacked-on, and only serviced the dialogue, so I cut them and squeezed their text into the third panel.  The end result is a less crowded page, and now I only have one panel left to draw instead of three!


I also wanted Daisy & Rose's dad to make his first appearance in this image, using up the white-space in the upper right corner, but there wouldn't have been much point.  He would've been almost completely covered by the speech bubbles.  :(

Lazy and lazier

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