Comic Practice NSFW
Added 2024-09-30 00:34:39 +0000 UTCThis is the practice for this month. And this is what I wanted to try, the rough style comic.
As you know, the comic of binding/capturing process need a lot of pages, and each comic panels need 3-10 times much time than the panels without bondage stuffs.
So I must find the faster way to show but can give the satisfaction for the readers.
I tried to do these only black and white but... I thought "which lines are for the restraint gears?" so I added colors(gray). Even without shading, it took me almost a day, it measn coloring makes the time needed +50%.
I still don't know about "what I can make it more simpler" and "what you would like me to draw more detailed/cleaned lines or so on". I can't promise I will do things in that way because it is always fight against limited time (and I must give up some pages to draw more detailed art) but I will be very welcome to the opinions!
Oh, and I'm sorry, if you don't like the socks.
これが今月の練習です。前からやってみたかったラフなスタイルの短編漫画を試しました。
ご存知のように、縛りの漫画はページ数が多く、その上各コマにも3から10倍程度の時間がかかってしまいます。
そのため、もっとはやく、かつ読者の皆さんに満足してもらえるような見せ方、画風を見つけなければいけないのですが・・・
最初は白黒だけで、塗らずにいこうと思ったのですが、線が多すぎて、どこまでが装備品かわからなくなってしまったので、グレースケールで色を付けることにしました。影はつけなかったのですが、ぺたぺた塗るだけで１日近くかかっています。だいたい所要時間は５０％増しくらいでしょうか。
もっと省略しても構わない部分や、もっと細かく描いてほしいところ、ラインがさすがに雑すぎるか、もっと雑でもコマ数が多い方がいいか、など、悩んでいることが多々あります。常に時間との戦いなので、その通りに描けるかどうかのお約束できませんが、ご意見は大歓迎です！
あ、それと、くつしたに興味のない方、ごめんなさい！
Comments
Thank you for the opinion! Hmm... when I think about the commissions, I should find the average of the work for the one page. And the detail level of the comic normally affects the speed of the time the readers feel. But like you said, it will also good to draw short but detailed comic. Or like the illustration sequence. I may try. The first thing I want to know is "what I should not make simple even if it is a comic". By drawing the latest comic, I am almost finding the my standard of the comic style art. :) Thank you!
Shippo Nosekura
2024-10-30 21:21:01 +0000 UTCThank you. I like the socks somehow, since long time ago. :3 The place is for the bad animals who almost rate "death penalty" by the angry master but saved and rater "life sentense". But the prison controllers are also animal lovers and the prisoners are enough wise to know the joy of the connection of the master and beast.
Shippo Nosekura
2024-10-30 21:14:21 +0000 UTC🐾 ❤️ 🧦 ❤️ 🐾
Grep
2024-10-06 02:19:54 +0000 UTCthe idea of the sock is funny and I like the facial expressions of both characters, besides that my friend I like to see some restrictions and how they seem solid but not rigid at the same time.
Aron fox 432
2024-10-01 22:54:11 +0000 UTCIt might depend on how you handle the story length. If the comic is short, then you can try drawing more detailed or make the views more fully. If the comic is very long, then you can, of course, make it simpler. And since it's already a long comic, we can get many views already, so that may not be a downfall. I'm fine with any way personally. Also it looks like not much feedback, maybe you can create a poll lately.
EBK21(eebssk1)
2024-09-30 18:02:50 +0000 UTC
