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A Perfect Marriage v0.70 Part A - Public Release

Hello Everyone,

Here's the Part A update of v.7.0 that was released to the patrons.  I'm releasing the update in two parts because I wanted to get something out over the holidays.  I'm already working on the second part and hope to have that done in January.

For people who reject Chris, this will be a shorter update for you, since he's featured a lot.  I apologize, but that's the way it will go from here on, where some updates will feature different characters.  I like to give warnings before releasing in case people want to wait.

I added a shortcut when you go to "Start" that allows you to skip to Part 3 while answering all the questions.

I also added a "STAT" box, so you can see the general impact of your choices.  These choices in Parts 1 & 2 help shape how Part 3 will go.

This update doesn't have fireworks, so don't go into it expecting to be fully gratified.  Part 3 will have fireworks of course, but the weekend (Sat afternoon & Sunday) is mostly David and Anna coming to grips with what happened, and it sets the stage for the crux of Part 3.

Thank you for interest in the project!

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Comments

Not just anything can go inside my Anna.

Adolfo

... well, once seen, I can't unsee, (not sure to thank you or not Adolfo :) ) and it'd not occurred to me before ... but .. I agree with Adolfo, if not too late, and it's coming our way again, yep, please gnarl up Marcel's dick and consolidate on a Chris cock.

Jimbo

Some teaser would be nice. Please

Adolfo

Well it's pretty much confirmed that at least Jake is gonna have a weapon on him. I agree it can be overboard if every character is hung like a horse.

Peedro

bullshit\

Robert

The incredible shrinking pennis

Adolfo

I'm going to chalk this up to shrinkage bro. Temperature/ level of excitement/ substances that may have been imbibed all could account for size change. let alone a pump or cockring.

Bringn_Da_Pain

It's not a problem of size ShackD, the size is what the author wants it to be, it's a problem of contradictions in the story. If in the text it mentions how big Chris's dick is at various times throughout the game and it is shown big in an image, it can't later be resized to make it much smaller.

Adolfo

I will really never understand some people's obsession with big dicks... Like I honestly don't want this VN to have horse cocks, so I'm gonna push back and say that Chris looked fine to me.

ShackD

Lol, yes, sometimes I see dead people.

Adolfo

I agree with almost everything you say, although I think Anna is not entirely inexperienced, she had a lot of sex with her partners albeit in a short period of time. She knows what the size difference is, just look at the dialogue with Kendra in the last update about the dildo. Anyway what I raise regarding size is a contradiction between Anna's day 4 images and Chris's photo, this was raised on f95zone ItsNotUs comparing images and it is true. It simply does not square the images and sizes.

Adolfo

I mean, I agree to be honest. But it's also important to not get ridiculous with the sizes. Chris is supposed to be big, and very big in Anna's eyes as she's not too experienced, but room needs to be left for the *really* big dick, Jake's. So yeah, Chris could be a bit bigger, I 100% agree on Marcel his dick needs a full rework, and Jake should be significantly bigger than even Chris. I don't care about Marvin and Hank but they should probably both be smaller than Chris. Maybe give Hank a girthy dick, idk.

Peedro

You're scaring me Adolpho. ;)

Rob

LOL. A good NTR needs some big, proper dicks.

Adolfo

That’s one hell of a penis diagnosis. Glad someone is putting in the work. I try not to dwell to much on the cocks.

Bringn_Da_Pain

The artistic composition of the update seems to me very good, the textures, faces, colors and environments are very well resolved. I love both the artistic aspect, and the literary aspect of the game. But I see a problem in the last update regarding ... the penises. I say this out of love and admiration for the work the artist is doing in this story. I think the penises are not well drawn and I explain myself. As for Marcel's penis it seems too smooth, I can blame that it shines to Alexia's saliva, but I look at it and it seems to me more like a penis-shaped ice lolly than a penis, textures are missing (veins, colors, shapes). As for Chris's penis it doesn't match the description of it and the image that appears on Anna's day 4 (Thursday morning) with the image Chris sends her. Thursday's image was that of a penis of about 15 cm. in a flaccid state. From the base to the middle of the thigh it can be established that it measures about 14-16 cm, far exceeding the testicular pouch. On the other hand, the one in the photo can only measure about 10-12 cm. in an erect state. Chris's hand is larger, at most the same as the penis, that is not a large penis but a normal penis; on the other hand the distance between the navel and the birth of the pubis can vary between 12 and 15 cm, and the penis does not reach from the base to the navel. The image of Chris in the picture he sends to Anna seems somewhat elongated (El Greco style, even with the beard and the look), but the penis is very small compared to the picture of day 4 and how it is described. Normally it would be about 22 or 23 cm (about 50% longer than it is flaccid) and would be above the navel. On the other hand, Chris is about 35 years old and at that age and with that size of erect penis it would normally have an inclination of about 45º or 60º, not 0º as it appears. It looks like a teenager's dick. As in the case of Marcel's penis I miss a variation in color and some vein.

Adolfo


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