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Stat box

I forgot to mention in my last post... I've added a stat box for the next update.  It's very basic, but I think it's interesting to see.  I don't want APM to be about stats and scoring, but this can help the reader see where David and Anna stand after the decisions made.  I've attached some screenshots of what it looks like.  Hope you enjoy!

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Comments

Will there still be progress on stats throughout part 3?

Cat Kuskie

where the hell is the finished product? Talk, talk,talk but no proceeds

Rex Dollinger

See my reply above

Mr. Palmer

I wouldn’t focus on that. They’re random screen shots… there’s no riddle to it.

Mr. Palmer

I hear ya, and I agree it’s a fine line. I’ll point out that this isn’t a story about a pure woman being corrupted… that would take way too much time to develop and execute (see A Wife and Mother). Rather, think of Anna as a hot-blooded woman who has hidden urges… they’re itches she’s never scratched because she believes in dignity and fidelity as being crucial in her existence… something her dad hammered into her when raising her. She always felt she needed to deny the urges, behave, marry young, and have a big family. Sure, she explored a bit in college and enjoyed it, but it didn’t feel right because her father was still in her life casting a shadow. That’s what ultimately led her to David… the kind of guy who would provide the life she wanted. But, she has urges like the rest of us, some more acute when she’s dealing with a hormonal imbalance. Robinson definitely tapped into those urges… he pushed the right buttons. She went along with it… she couldn’t control her urges, but when the stakes got high, she backed off and subsequently felt extremely guilty about it. As for Stenstromber, she was never sexually charged in that scene, she was just extremely vulnerable and felt like she was sharing a deep moment with Stenstromber… for a minute he was able to take the grief away from her, and she was drawn to it like a moth to a flame. Going to his house would’ve been very problematic for her, but she didn’t think he had bad intentions in that moment of sharing their grief, and further, even if she knew of his intentions, she would’ve said she could reject him at any time… she truly believes that. But, she’s naive to how much she can be manipulated.

Mr. Palmer

Any update?

Eulerian Neumann

well you can justify by saying anything. its porn logic..For me there is a thin line between allowing touches and enjoying touches...For example, anyone can get the massage to relax and allow touches..similarly anyone can kiss uncle aunt relative to show affection...but if you read flashback..it's more about enjoying those touches and groping sexually..In this case I agree Ana think Rob is gay she is comfortable and she allows him to touch..but when she start enjoying it sexually that's where it mean she is corrupted. Thats all I wanted to say. Rest yea justifying that ana enjoying other men touches saying she is naive and vulnerable is not true. And one more thing beside logic, I want to request is I can understand the developer want to extend tease for few more updates before showing sex scenes...So my request is, it would be hot if those tease scene can be made more intimate and with little animation..that would be really nice. Just normal touch in ass render don't excite much..That's all I can say from my side.

NiksTheGhost

Not true. Firstly in Mr. Stenstormber case, she was vulnerable because of her father's death and her trust for Mr. Stenstormber. That eventually led to her seeking comfort from him. N the pregnant massage scene specifically mentioned about her hormones imbalance iirc, and how she feels comfortable with Rob because she thought of him being gay. So, she might get horny with both of them eventually, but there's a solid reason of her naively trusting ppl who in reality want to prey on her. N tbh, this theme is carrying along still in character of Kendra, Chris, etc. So now we have more harmonal imbalance, alcohol, and david cheating; that's why, it won't be too much beyond reality to see Anna crossing the path which she didn't do in past. Personally waiting for her to get corrupted soon, or atleast seeing her nude soon.

Sun Elune

After watching Mr Stenstormber and Robinson flashback scenes. I can say this story contradict the concept of slow burn itself. .On one hand you are trying to develop slow burn story with extended tease by justifying ana is shy, she just had a baby, she can only be corrupted slowly with alcohol/ money issue twist/ thinking that her husband is cheating/ kendra forcing her. On other hand, the two flashback scene where Ana is not taking alcohol, she didnt think that her husband cheated on her, she had no money issues, she was pregnant and she still enjoy all groping, kiss and fondling from both of them, just not sex. So she was already corrupted beforehand when everything was fine. So, i dont get the point of slow burn or extended scene in upcoming update. Story wise It could have been better and tease render could have been better too by giving options from Ana's POV whether to get corrupted or not when everything was fine.

NiksTheGhost

maybe last week of this month or first week of next month

GyuSeok Sim

will Marvin have a real chance with Anna, or is it just teasìng on her part? only Mr. Palmer could answer :)

claudio brovelli

Is there any sort of order when these stats were taken?

Cosmo

Thanks for your great work. Is it a tip of the game paths or just examples?

Adolfo

Very much so.

BC8

I got to be honest, and I know I can’t be the only one that each of these drops make me want the next release so bad.

Bringn_Da_Pain

Woooow marvin

jorge rodriguez

yes, that's one of the exciting things about the story unfolding. Have enjoyed her thought process about "being bad" with each of the potential suitors and how she's allowed things like Marvin reaching up her skirt, etc.

MS21

Love this addition, will definitely make replaying from the beginning worth it. Is this the final box or will there be more, such as: Anna likes exhibition Anna likes giving oral Anna likes receiving oral Anna likes public sex Anna enjoys anal sex Anna likes being photographed or videotaped Anna likes being watched while having sex You get the idea

Bringn_Da_Pain

Keep in mind - just because Anna rejects someone, that doesn't mean they go away and that there won't be sexual content between them. Granted, you won't be forced into anything with that person you reject, but you will still have an option to give in to them. Think of it as nonconsensual/reluctance, if that's something you enjoy seeing Anna subject to.

Mr. Palmer

That's great nd will greatly help in not getting into route that one doesn't like.

Sun Elune


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