Robinson
Added 2023-09-08 20:11:14 +0000 UTCHello,
I said I'd follow up on the new character, Robinson.
First off, the attached image didn't make the story, but I wanted to share it because I put some time into it. During the massage, Rob pulled Anna's straps down her arms, while telling her the straps were in the way of massaging her back. He hoped to use this tactic as a precursor to getting all of her clothes off. But, after some time, she pulled the straps back up, in fear of her breasts spilling out.
About this massage scene... it was something I've wanted to put into the story since the beginning because I wanted a few flashback scenes of pregnant Anna. Initially, my plan was to have the scene with a character you're familiar with: HANK! Yes, Hank. The original plan was - the day after the restaurant scene - Hank comes over to visit Anna and apologize for groping her. Anna forgives him, and then later on during his visit - after Anna complains about her body being sore - Hank talks her into a massage.
However... I found that too unrealistic, especially him being the boss of her company. At that point in time in Anna's life, she wouldn't have allowed that with him under any circumstance.
Rob on the other hand... she allowed him. She had her guard down because she thought he was a nice guy, and further, she suspected he was gay. And she bought his story about being a physical therapist.
Rob's an average looking character, which is something I wanted in the story. Too many stories feature very attractive or very unattractive characters, visually. The everyday person seems to be forgotten. Rob is the everyday guy who lives down the street.
As we learn, though, he's serial seducer and opportunist. He portrays as the fun, harmless, friendly guy, which endears him to women in the neighborhood. He then uses this to get his foot in the door, quite literally, so that he could find a way to sleep with them.
Why would Anna, seven-months pregnant, let this guy touch and fondle her? I actually developed the massage scene from Anna's POV in addition to Rob's POV, and it shows all her thoughts. But, I had trouble finding a good place to put it within the flow of the story, so I left it out. I liked Rob's POV more in this instance, so that we could get to know him better. I may put Anna's POV into the story in future updates, or I may release it as bonus content for Patrons, if people are interested.
I'm a bit surprised by the poll results. I thought it was going to be more controversial, but I'm glad most Patrons enjoyed the scene! It took a lot of time because I kept having to show restraint to not have Anna become too much of a naughty girl. You have no idea how much time I spend trying to perfect these scenes, just like the Marvin scene at happy hour. I have to find a sweet spot that makes me happy. In turn, I hope it makes you happy!
Comments
I'm a fan of pregnancy content, and really liked this scene. I understand some people are less enthusiastic, but I hope we'll have more opportunities to see Anna like this in the future, with appropriate options for those who would rather skip it.
Res Ipsa
2024-05-22 14:52:28 +0000 UTCYou should have put this image in the last version, it really doesn’t take anything away from the story line but it would have made the story a little more intriguing. I don’t know about the others but I’m starting to loose interest in what started to be a very captivating story.
Cosmo
2023-10-10 16:57:39 +0000 UTCIt is not clear to me why you did not want to introduce this spectacular image in the update.
Adolfo
2023-09-11 12:19:07 +0000 UTCi think with add this character story become more seduction out of dark said
sslovoe
2023-09-09 08:00:18 +0000 UTCI'm not a big fan of pregnancy too. But if u slot in tease or seduce scene by chris or hank we will consider it. But we always supporting u Mr Palmer
Venom Vampire
2023-09-09 03:56:22 +0000 UTCI’m not a big fan of pregnancy sex, I do think you could have put this post into he last update.
Cosmo
2023-09-09 03:16:10 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the pregnancy/ massage scene. Sexy women are sexy women pregnant or not, and I imagine there is a possibility of some lactation scenes in Episode 3, as she is actively nursing, it would in reality be impossible not to. I'd definitely be into seeing the scene from Anna's point of view. I think you would have been fine with the straps falling down, as she was more caught up in the heat of the moment. Now if he went to touch her or actively move the straps, I think that would have been a bridge to far. In my opinion I think the scene could have been made steamier by having Anna fantasize about David or a college lover during the message and take her to a more erotic space to be snapped back by the realization that its Robinson actually touching her. I don't love the depiction of Hank, as I've comment previously. I think making him a late 40 early 50 more physically fit and attractive man would have made him a much more powerful player in this story, but at the same time outside of Chris, his is the story I'm most intrigued by. Being the boss inviting the aspiring partner to racquet ball, golf, etc. could have opened up a lot of Anna's competitiveness and been a much more enticing potential partner for extracurricular activities. Also having Hank command waiters, attendants, etc. would have really shown he is a man of importance and people actively bow to his will. This could have opened up Anna to being disgusted, taking the role of a brat, or being submissive. Seeing him dismiss other attractive women, but paying attention to Anna could have really triggered something in her, plus made her want to please her employer. Regardless drop 1 of Part 3 is much anticipated and cannot come soon enough. As they say let the painter paint, and I can't wait to enjoy the masterpiece.
Bringn_Da_Pain
2023-09-08 21:47:05 +0000 UTCNot a big fan of pregnancy scenes but I will say that the scene was well made, and very realistic, I really enjoy the inner dialogues the characters have, so the whole talking himself through the process was a lot of fun to read and see. The character is very likeable as well, a regular guy, so even more of a reason to root for him lol Excellent work.
Lastson12
2023-09-08 21:21:40 +0000 UTCI will be honest..I didn't like the pregnant scene. But if next update is about this tease scene than i think, i will not be waiting anxiously for the next update and will wait for the one after that. However, good job and nice story line though. I do have to give it for the efforts you made.
NiksTheGhost
2023-09-08 21:00:51 +0000 UTCYes when I saw that massage scene somewhat I felt that the Anna I know wouldn't have allowed this go that way. It's seemed a different Anna probably because we are seeing from Rob's POV. But I can't admit it wasn't hot. So I didn't bother. I am a horny guy so any scene would be hot ig😂. But yeah what you are trying to do is way more hotter and although it's frustrating somewhat to wait for long just for a tease I can't help but admit it's too hot this way. Will be supporting you Mr. Palmer. Take your time perfecting this.
Eulerian Neumann
2023-09-08 20:32:19 +0000 UTCThanks for sharing. I can totally understand the conundrum you faced of where to logically add the Rob story line. There was no perfect place to weave it in so I and think you made the right decision to not go too deep. Now that I know more about Rob (again, great name!) I can say that I am fully supportive and would be interested in seeing his story line expanded, either through bonus content or his own story. Maybe Anna is one of his many conquests in the neighborhood. Again, that would be its own story. As always, great work.
Rob
2023-09-08 20:31:39 +0000 UTC
