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Rob flashback

Just curious what your thoughts are about the flashback massage scene.  I’m surprised that it wasn’t more controversial.

I tweaked that scene a lot. There’s a version of it from Anna’s POV that shows what she was thinking during it, but it didn’t make the cut into the story, so I might release as bonus content if people are interested, along with some backstory on developing that scene.

So what’s your overall take on that scene?

Comments

It concludes part 2

Mr. Palmer

yes obviously, but it will be fun to enjoy ana's courruption

NiksTheGhost

I just hope it will be better than AWAM game...they are so slow in updates...since last 5 years and released aroung 8GB game without sex scene. That slow burn is like i lost my interest there

NiksTheGhost

better than her coworker and husband frirnd ,,,like him more and old man too

sslovoe

So did this conclude episode 2, or is there a touch more before the next chapter?

Bringn_Da_Pain

The big question for me is who will Anna succumb to first?

BobCratchitt

Personally I'd like that scheming bitch Kendra to ultimately 'burn in hell'...

BobCratchitt

I also want to see story building around kendra revenge plot where she might try to corrupt ana more maybe with Chris/Jake/ Marvin help.. that's initial plot......So Rob for me is just like an extra man to have fun with.

NiksTheGhost

This was the first episode I really liked the Marvin content and her reaction. He isn’t my first choice, but I enjoy the content. I can’t wait to see the next evolution of Anna.

Bringn_Da_Pain

It was good...i am looking forward for a scene where it gets more intimate. if not complete sex..but intimate touching..try to add atleast 2 possible scenes just in case if someone doesn't want to go for Rob, it would diverse the story and scene with Chris or marvin where ana take initiative to be physical for story build up.

NiksTheGhost

Add further scene please rob come to house again

Venom Vampire

I think it was a great way to show that she is susceptible to the attention from others even as a happily married woman. I think you write were Rob got a little to handsy to fast, but I understand the length of a game can’t be real time. Rob strikes me as a long game guy, and I think he would have eventually been successful especially with the current situation.

Bringn_Da_Pain

the scene itself was pretty hot. However with his nasty thoughts and his mission to get yet another lonely neighbourhood wifey as a trophy I’m not quite sure 😅

kaz

I also enjoyed the scene, but I think it could have gone just a little farther, particularly where it showed how large and hard her nipples were and would like to have known her feelings and thoughts.

Charles Russell

I’m a sucker for the poker boys getting some

Jess

Enjoyed it. To your point, having the backstory could have amplified the scene. How did it get to that point? Why would she allow this guy Rob (great name by the way : ) ) to put his hands on her?

Rob


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