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Q&A responses

Hello Patrons,

Thanks for the great questions!  I’ll try my best to answer them, but I’m careful not to spoil anything.

Q (Sun Elune):  Will Anna past be revealed? Like will her ex play any role in shaping how she behaves, or whom she prefers?

A:  You will for sure learn some things about Anna’s past in Part 2, and it definitely plays a big role in her actions, but due to the time restraints I have developing the game, I can’t spend too much time delving into Anna’s past.  I do, however, have a short-story prequel in mind, but production wouldn’t happen until after ‘A Perfect Marriage’ is finished.

Q (Kevin Mak):  Will we learn more about Kendra? What plans she has for David and Anna?

A:  Naturally you’ll learn more about Kendra in Part 2 since she will be featured quite a bit, but she’s not a focal point in the story and her path will be fairly linear.  Her motivations and plans will certainly become clearer, but really, the intro scene of ‘A Perfect Marriage’ encapsulates her accurately.  She may end up happy or sad, but that’s all dependent on choices you will make for Anna and David.

Q (voul1):  Will the part 2 have more unseen interactions with Chris? Or the same with part 1 just with the addition of Annas thoughts – perspective?

A:  There will be at least three interactions with Anna and Chris that weren’t shown in Part 1.  In addition, the interactions you saw in Part 1 will be repeated in Part 2 with Anna’s thoughts.  Some of this repeated material is abridged though, such as the texting on Monday night... we won’t go through each text again, but you’ll see her thoughts on the conversation as a whole.

Another way to answer the question is to say that once Part 2 is done, you won’t have missed any interactions between Anna and Chris.  You will see them all.

Q (DLM):  Depending on David’s choices at the end, will Anna pay him back and have an affair?

A:  I’m not going to reveal how the story will go, but your choices will matter.  I plan to release a post before Part 2 that lays out expectations in terms of choices and paths.

That said, keep in mind this isn’t a revenge story.  I saw where people were saying that this has turned into a television drama.  My response is, I didn’t do all this buildup and attention-to-detail just to have a basic revenge or reconcile story.  Besides, as you’ll see in Part 2, it’s not really in Anna’s nature to act out of spite or vengeance, so she isn’t going to go sleep with a bunch of men a day later to piss off David.  Sorry to disappoint!  That’s just not who she is.

Q (David Nicholson):  Are you keeping to the same schedule as Part 1.  Five releases.  Monday to Thursday and Friday and Saturday together?

A:  The releases will be very similar in Part 2 and indeed might end up with five releases.  The patrons overwhelmingly voted for me to release the content as I go, as opposed to waiting to release bigger updates.  I know it can be frustrating receiving smaller updates, so that’s why I advise people to wait after a few updates if the smaller updates bother you.  Naturally, the end of each day is a good stopping point for the Part 2 updates.  I’m not sure yet whether Friday and Saturday will be combined, but it’s definitely possible.

As for Part 3, all bets are off on timing.  Part 3 isn’t going to follow the same day-by-day schedule.  You might have an update span a week, or it could just be a single event.  Part 3 will be more of an open canvas, and it will likely take longer to produce the content in each update given the different scenarios at play.

Q (Raul Lewis):  What are the approx release dates for the upcoming updates

A:  The next release (Monday from Anna’s perspective) will be some time in November.  Beyond that, I don’t have an exact schedule, but it will probably take me anywhere from 1 to 3 months to finish each day in Part 2.

Q (Adolfo):  Will there be any flashbacks to Anna’s relationship with her father? It seems to have influenced her attitude towards older men.

A:  No flashbacks, but it will be discussed.  Flashbacks take time to develop, and I'd rather spend that valuable time moving the story forward instead of spending a lot of time in the past.

You are correct that her father has had a heavy influence on her, for better or for worse, and that will be discussed often.

One thing to point out is that I will - from time-to-time - offer some bonus content on Patreon, such as content I cut out of the script due to time constraints, or maybe posts that add context to the story, such as a post going into more detail about Anna’s relationship with her father.

Q (NTRLOVER795):  Will we see Kendra befriend and corrupt Anna against David, in order to destroy their marriage? I would love to see Kendra slowly corrupting Anna in to sleeping with Chris

A:  We definitely know Kendra has befriended Anna, because Anna mentions it to David more than once in Part 1.  Whether Kendra can corrupt Anna, that remains to be seen!

One important thing to note about Anna that will be touched on in Part 2... she has always felt uncomfortable around other females, as if she doesn’t fit in.  She has a great desire to “fit in” and not feel uncomfortable.  Kendra befriending her is exciting for Anna, and she’s very interested in making it a good friendship.

Q (Jimbo):  I’ve no erotic interest in Anna’s mother, (although I don’t remember seeing her, so never rule anything out) so I’m not suggesting an elaboration in that direction, however I would expect Anna to generally talk and confide in her as she’s around I.e. I’m assuming it’s the maternal granny looking after Sophie etc.  What would Anna’s mother’s advice be if so? Did she have a similar experience in her marriage? Also, Sophie seems a bit of an after thought, I’d expect Anna to be more attentive/protective of her

You are correct that Anna’s mother hasn’t been featured much at all, and right now I have no plans to make her an important character.  The reason is, there’s only so much time/effort I want to spend on this project in order to get it finished and not have it drag on for years like we see with other visual novels.  I wouldn’t rule out that at some point her mom will make appearances other than phone calls or texts, it really just depends on the flow of things.

As for Sophie, that’s a bit of a different story.  I want Sophie to be included more as merely a prop, and you will see her more in Part 2.  Just realize that this is an adult novel, so any image of a child attached to this type of story is something to be cautious with, even considering I have zero intent to have the child tied into any adult-oriented scene.

Q (vampress):  Will Kendra start a lesbian relationship with Anna sort of like a slave/mistress thing to get her away from David

No, sorry.  Lesbian isn’t something explored in this novel.

Q (meiwow):  Is the wife a size queen?

Anna has never really noticed a difference in size with the sex partners she’s had.  She has a curious mind though, and she’s always wondered if size really does matter.  Being that her body is extremely sensitive to touch, she realizes a large penis might feel different inside of her, and she's fascinated by that possibility, but given her lack of experience, she cannot be called a size queen right now.

Q (par85):  Is there any path that this couple would not cheat?

Yes.  Sure, the goal of the story is to add adversity to the marriage and put it to the test, but if you want them to remain faithful you can make the obvious decisions for them to make it happen.

Q (PaychecksDK):  Is this your story?

Yes.  I’ve collaborated with teamequipe from literotica over the years, but this is fully being written/developed by me.  The only thing I’m not doing are the visuals... that’s done by an artist I’m working with.

Q (sslovoe):  as creater you accept our oponion for making good better we not give bad review by hate we want game be great

I’m open to all opinions and feedback.  Sometimes I need to refrain from reading/responding though because I have limited free time to develop this game, so I want to put my efforts into it.  But for the most part I believe I’m fair and reasonable with feedback, and I appreciate hearing it from the patrons!

Q (jay):  Will part 2 still maintain NTR mystery elements like part 1 did? I love the mystery of did she or didn’t she cheat.

Not really in Part 2, but yes in Part 3.

Q (Venom Vampire):  Do you have breastfeeding scene?

As explained in the answer above about Sophie, any kind of gray area of having a child in an adult game I want to avoid because there’s laws/rules in place to prevent that.  I don’t want to ruin a good thing by stepping near or over the line, especially when it’s not necessary for the story, and especially when I have no intent whatsoever to use a child in a sexual manner. Sure, a mother breastfeeding a child is natural and acceptable in a vacuum, but when you put it within an adult game, I don’t know how others would feel about that. I’d rather not roll the dice at this point.

Q (Adolfo):  Could be possible to name the saves?

I’ll have to look into this again.  I briefly looked into it and didn’t like how the feature – if turned on – required everyone to name the saves.  I decided that requiring saves be named versus not requiring it wasn’t ideal for everyone.  I’ll look into it again though.

Q (Avid Reader):  In Part I, so far we have been introduced to three people that want to corrupt/persuade Anna into cheating on David. The best friend Chris, Anna’s boss Hank, her coworker Jake. We have seen a lot of the former and we are going to get more of the latter two in Part II. Just wondering in Part III if we push Anna in a certain direction of who to give in to does that effect the potential pathways of her other would-be suitors. For example, if we nudge her in the direction of Chris or Jake does that close off the potential for Hank? Or no matter what decision we make, it will be independent of anything else that might happen with another person later on?

This is an excellent question.  Frankly, this will probably be the hardest element to pull off in Part 3 and having it all work nicely.  I’ll say that the plan is for Anna to be able to move forward on the paths for all men in the story if chosen.  I hesitate to speak in absolutes because there could be scenario where it’s not plausible to make it happen for all, but my hope is to make it work, even if it adds some time to development.

Comments

Whoever your artist is that created Anna please give them a big thankyou!

BobCratchitt

What was your question?

Adolfo

It's a good idea, it's also something that some of her "suitors" could see her doing. Not to mention that Hank could be a bad boy and milk her at her vacation home while making her dress like a cow (like in hentai)... Maybe I've gone too far, I'm sorry, sometimes I get carried away by my cowboy side hehehe ;)

Bentxi

Cheers for the responses and engagement with us, impressive, and much appreciated 👍Your answers above add to the shape of the story you're telling us, and it's looking good :)

Jimbo

That is fine.

Mr. Palmer

And using a breast pump?

Adolfo

I understand perfectly well that you don't include Anna breastfeeding her daughter in the story, but that doesn't mean that her breasts continue to produce milk and... (I also understand that there are people who can generate some conflict, so I don't expect anything , it is preferable to sacrifice that and continue enjoying this magnificent story)

Bentxi

Same here @chuck

dkbacon

I’m not a fan of a woman getting corrupted by several people. Too many games have a woman getting corrupted by several, or more. I’d rather corruption by one or two tops. But I try to enjoy all

chuck edwards

Thanks a lot for your answers. You are doing well

Adolfo

well for now Anna got Hank, Chris "Wild bill" and Jake, but then there were that "need panties" dude at the bar, so you just need a few more dudes from Anna's work that we dont know about yet, maybe some nightclub/pub random dudes, so if youre not carefull, youll end of with 20+ dudes and a game where everything is Fing. And the game will end with - "Who is daddy to the kid?".

dkbacon

We shall see. We all have differing opinions of darker I guess lol

chuck edwards

Oh thanks for this message - I meant to message you but forgot. Will do now.

Mr. Palmer

What are you specifically referring to? It can go down a dark path for sure… I just want to be true to the characters and I also don’t want to spoil or give hints.

Mr. Palmer

I was hoping it went a bit of a darker path but still a good watch. Be nice to see her corrupted, but not 10 people corrupting her like other developers do in their games.

chuck edwards

Thanks for taking your time do do this. Did you miss my question or was the answer too spoilerish?

Jess

Thank you for an awesome game so far I look forward to more and future projects

PaychecksDK


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