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Rough Draft: Late Bloomer

A new story about a man going through a difficult time in his young adult life, and needs the women around him to get by. What they don't know that his problem has to deal with something extreamly personal, and extreamly big. Can they help him get past his difficult and accept who he is, and what he has. They may have to give it everything they got, including there bodies. Check out the link in your messages.

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Thanks, though I'll admit, Wrongfully and Succubus are the ones I'm waiting for!

Rhys

It’s interesting but the timeline feels wonky. The way it was written made it seem like you changed his age several times in the writing process. And I was a little confused because it seemed like his twin was a senior in hs and then it was revealed she was in college.


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