It Runs in the Family: Chapter 17
Added 2017-11-10 19:55:18 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/s/oozmrxdtkp22qiy/It%20Runs%20in%20the%20Family%20chapter%2017.pdf?dl=0
Bit of a long one coming in, but I honestly love the flirting between Michelle and Connie. I established Tara and Jane early in the story and the reasons why Connie fell in love with them, but this arc is really about making us fall for Michelle too. Hopefully it works and you all enjoy it haha. This arc will be finished up with the next chapter, which I'll try to get done this month but might be first next month. So here's part 3 of "A Day Out With Michelle." Enjoy!
PS: I apparently forgot to tag Chapter 16 so I had a mini heart attack wondering if I ever actually put that up for you guys XD
Comments
I tried to give each girl their own dynamic with Connie, on a scale between emotional or sexual, so I'm glad you enjoy their sweet chemistry together
Sammynona
2017-11-11 16:56:48 +0000 UTCI've already finished the rough draft of the next chapter so you won't have to wait long for the fun!
Sammynona
2017-11-11 16:55:34 +0000 UTCLet me know if you can get it on your computer. If you're still having problems I can try to send you the file directly so you can read it
Sammynona
2017-11-11 16:54:59 +0000 UTCI do find Michelle and Connie so sweet together. I honestly love their chemistry much more than Tara or Jane. Sure, Tara and Jane have steamier chemistry, but if I had to pick one to stick with Connie right now, it would be Michelle. I feel like she'll have to change Michelle the least and the two are so sweet together.
Trixie Adara
2017-11-11 13:59:20 +0000 UTCI can't read it on my phone 😢😢😢
Stephen Williams
2017-11-11 08:45:14 +0000 UTC...well, that ending sure was unexpected :E love it
Dyamonde
2017-11-10 22:00:22 +0000 UTCwoo, more Connie/Michelle
Dyamonde
2017-11-10 21:05:07 +0000 UTC