6/29/2017: Falling for her Tits Chapter 26
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Despite getting sick and writers block, I finally present the (almost) finale for Falling for her Tits. This chapter caps off the stories and the characters in a fun way that I think everyone will enjoy. I will be writing another short arc as a proper finale, covering the girls having hypnotic fun at prom with everyone, but rather than work on that a month at a time I'm instead going to work on it as one complete project (because finding continuity mistakes from previous chapters is really annoying.) I'll be posting that ending here on Patreon for everyone of course, so be sure to look forward to that.
I've got to say that Falling for her Tits was my first really popular series, and it's a great feeling to see how much people have enjoyed it as it evolved from just a humiliation based mind control story to a more involved romantic mind control story, with humiliation. It's been a wild ride, and I hope everyone else has enjoyed it as well. I'd love to hear feedback on the ending and on the series in general, like your favorite scenes or your favorite characters, so please comment below :)
Comments
Further critiques of the series? There was a great deal of 'flux' early on as to character descriptions. Amy originally being described as brunette, Diana and Cathy as blonde. I myself advised that Cathy be brunette and Amy blonde for going for the 'total power' sort of reversal. I might not have done so if I knew that Amy was a social outsider who was actually shy about her huge breasts and then advanced because of their power, reinventing herself, and taking down bully Diana / Diane. Plus, with the name of 'Vanderbilt', I figured that Amy was inherently wealthy as well. But the sort of story of a heroic or sort of heroic, strong and spirited but more plain girl going up against a 'Total Heather', doing well, but then getting slapped down back to her place or in humiliation pushes some of my buttons. I'm a bit evil that way. This story turned out more romantic than that, Amy less a monster than a corrupted 'social super-hero' who rose up herself, and then became much of what she first opposed. We see that Amy can actively and even aggressively help people with her power as well as abuse them. But 'help' of course, can be matter of interpretation. I'm a proponent of Amy using her powers and practicing 'Balance' in the use of them for her own benefit and the greater good. But it doesn't take a genius to see that even purely good intensions can become corrupt and how 'balance' can quickly fail when no one can truly counter the controller. Or they are as addicted to the power in a sub way as the controller is a dom or self centered. But that's not a bad way to end a mind control story either. Amy could go on to become some 'self help' cult guru. Or merely a very successful practicing psychologist, or counseling service, curing many ills through the power of her breasts. The second is certainly far more likely to maintain some 'balance'. It suggests college in Amy's future--which she might have problems with! Well, with Amy's power, she could be a success running a 'psychic help' business! Amy lost control of her powers, but for being subbed to Cathy, then she regained her control, but freed those she didn't need or overtly punished. Then she was shocked by what happened to Cathy, and then tried to quit 'cold turkey' in some wrong ways. Now, the 'reformed' Amy is back in business. Questions for the conclusion of the series might be: What role will Cathy play in her future? Her wife? close lover? Fetish humiliated Personal Assistant, seeing women come and go in Amy's life. Gina and Brooke are now close friends who know Amy's secrets. How much freedom will Amy allow them in the future? Amy used Brooke as her piggy bank. Will she now do a similar, if proportionately less abusive, use of Brooke's parents? They might well become the funders of any life's enterprise that Amy comes up with. What will be the fate of Diana? She, and possibly one or two others, might be even more addicted and fixated on Amy than Cathy? Presumably, they might become Amy's subjects forever as well? Casting them lose might be cruel and dangerous for them? Do they become permanent pets, and / or a warning to Amy what abuse of her power can bring? Anyway, this was the story that really attracted my attention in a big way right from the beginning. The Cathy, Amy, Beth intrigue and animosity really ramping up my interest!
larqven
2017-07-23 19:35:25 +0000 UTCAmy had the sense to instruct entranced Brooke to warn her of the imminent arrival of her parents. She didn't have the sense to worry about that first! I suppose with some damage done to the house, entrancing Brooke's parents was only prudent, but clearly, they had slipped Amy's mind! How this girl managed to run dozens of slaves without fallout beyond Cathy is something of a miracle. Not a very disciplined girl to be sure, despite her recent efforts. To be fair, she is feeding a need she let build up in trying to 'go straight and narrow'. But what fun is that? More to the point, exercising her power and indulging a little might prevent Amy from falling off the wagon later. Right now, though, she and Cathy worry me, in that Amy might be all too eager to over-indulge, and Cathy all too eager to let her? What is worse is that Gina and Brooke might not be much help either? Slaves liking this as much as Amy, it would seem. It suddenly occurred to me that Gina and Brooke might have actually been zapped many more times than Cathy was for their proximity or utility to Amy! Albeit, Cathy really got nailed hard by Amy in her few times. In short, Gina and Brooke might be 'addicted' Amy's power as well, which might be one reason why they've been comparatively so cool about all of this when it was revealed? Amy might have been right the first time--'cold turkey' might have been the best for--everyone? Well, we may have crossed that bridge. It'll be interesting to see what happens now. Amy was fairly restrained with Gina's mom. But she might go overboard with Brooke's parents for comparatively little? I suspect Amy might like the idea of a big house, access to cash again, and maybe a video empire, courtesy of Brooke's family? Well, we'll see if Amy can learn to indulge without 'overdosing'. You've been quite good at keeping us guessing in this series!
larqven
2017-07-04 23:21:29 +0000 UTCAccidentally posted too early. For my final parts this delves more into personal preference. I was hoping for a more equal ground between Amy and Cathy, either one permanently in the drivers seat so to speak is a little boring for my tastes as my favorite parts of the story involved the push and pull of both of their sub/dom streaks. Even just Cathy I might have preferred as I do enjoy a good reversal of fortune. Don't let my criticism let you think I hated it or anything. The erotic scenes were still excellent and a happy, romantic ending was nice, just fell a bit short of the aspirations I had for it.
M H
2017-07-01 02:32:50 +0000 UTCLoved this series to start with, merely like it at this point. The crux of my issues lie with Amy. Her turn to good was too easy, quick, and unearned. She goes from abusing the hell out of her powers and everyone around her to completely benevolent, if sometimes slightly misguided after a very short and mild period of Cathy having the reigns. Years worth of bad habits shouldn't have been that easy to break. Which leads to my next part: everyone just being cool with her being back in control. All that abuse that they now know about should make a number of them very leery that Amy could slip back to old vices.
M H
2017-07-01 02:23:00 +0000 UTCNoooo! I have chapters 13 and 14 both done, I'm just rushing to edit them both so I can put them out together! I can put them out right away if you don't mind a few typos, or I can get people to proofread them and they'll be out in 3 or 4 days
Sammynona
2017-06-30 18:19:41 +0000 UTC"I'll have the next installment of It Runs in the Family ready before the end of the month"? :(
Dyamonde
2017-06-30 17:20:27 +0000 UTCMan, I thought that Brooke's parents' "earn your own money" thing was an attempt at sober parenting of a rich kid. But it turns out they're just douchebags. Go get 'em, Cathy and Amy! (Also, yay happy ending.)
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2017-06-30 14:20:50 +0000 UTCFar as happy endings go, this was probably the best outcome for Amy and Cathy.
ParagonRocky
2017-06-30 07:20:22 +0000 UTC
