4/6/2017: EAC Chapter 4
Added 2017-04-06 21:33:47 +0000 UTCWe've got all the players arriving at the mansion, so it's time for the fun to begin! As always feel free to comment below!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mn7x5vi4cmy1y75/EC%20chapter%204.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Amber sure does have a penchant for the dramatic. You're right, she could have stayed in the shadows and enslaved each girl quietly as the night went on. But this way they all know what she can do right off the bat, and she gets to hunt them all down. This isn't so much practical as personal. She is enjoying herself immensely, and since her victims enjoy it too (eventually...), she has no guilt over it because she might genuinely think she's helping them by giving them pleasure in worshipping her.
ParagonRocky
2017-04-08 00:10:51 +0000 UTCA certain side note is that Amber's breast power is very potent! It also doesn't require too much speaking, the target being ensnared and largely subjugated by wish alone. Emma being essentially defeated and 'rolled' into a submissive in two minutes of exposure and getting 'face smothered'. It only took a few simple additional sentences to nearly enslave the toughest and angriest girl of the group. Applying this to the 'Falling' story, and Amber would seem to be more powerful or more experienced than Amy? I'm not sure if she's smarter, but she does seem to be more inclined to plan? I think we can freely 'put to bed' any notions of Cathy Damico being some secret submissive if the breast power in the two stories are essentially the same. Just mere exposure to them, and especially being 'smothered' by them can instill powerful and lingering feelings of addiction, submissiveness and glorification of the girl with the breasts. Just one exposure of seconds can begin that, with no verbal instructions required! If the power were equivalent, Cathy really did remarkably well. After playing around with Amy's breasts while in control, I could see now how she might have crumpled afterwards. Anyway, presumably the girls are locked in the mansion, and / or their cars are effectively locked in the garage with the steel garage door rather tough to smash down even with a car. We've got some 'horror' scenes to take place in the mansion and possibly in the woods outside. Great chapter, a story that really appealed to me!
larqven
2017-04-07 02:58:19 +0000 UTCI certainly agree with KingRockyIV, this is clearly the best chapter yet, and indeed, was one of the best story segments I've read. It had a great deal of the fear, humiliation, and mind control of your style that I really love to read! Spoilers: The interesting thing to me here was the sheer number of girls that Amber has to play with, but she's limited by the now familiar, 'One person at a time' rule. I've been wondering how she'd carefully sneak up on, and zap each girl one by one. Instead, Amber seemed unconcerned about it, even waiving good chances of zapping victims individually, in order to gloat to the whole group. Amber could have zapped Maria when she lagged behind, or used Ashley to hold Rebecca. Instead, she declined both those possibilities to show off. But it did make for a powerful scene, Amber's haughty attitude in bringing down Emma, the tallest, and presumably the biggest and strongest girl of the group. So now, the remaining five have to worry about not just Amber, but Ashley and Emma as muscle.
larqven
2017-04-07 02:36:26 +0000 UTCFavorite chapter so far! Whole lot going on this time, with the full cast all together and the festivities in full swing now. Emma seemed to hang in there pretty strong, which was impressive. I wonder if Ashley fought that hard when she went under...
ParagonRocky
2017-04-06 23:02:09 +0000 UTC
