10/08/2016: Falling for her Tits: Chapter 15
Added 2016-10-08 17:47:04 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/s/cxwyfauaifuht8e/Falling%20chapter%2015.pdf
And here it is folks, chapter 15 right on time. This marks that we're about 2/3rds of the way through what I have planned for the story. I'm currently editing the first seven chapters of Falling for her Tits to be published to amazon and smashwords as a full book, and as a bonus the book will feature a new short scene in the opening with Amy's mom and a brand new chapter where Beth get's her chance for revenge on Amy. I'll keep you posted on when the book comes out and I hope some of you interested in buying it will leave some good reviews too to help sales :)
In the meantime enjoy this extra long chapter haha
Comments
I just try to take the convenient route of saying there was a spare cheerleader outfit in her size :P Also it seems like you're going through adding commentary to every chapter which is awesome, I love hearing fans reactions to the twists and everything :D
Sammynona
2016-12-23 17:10:52 +0000 UTCThis was so much an outstanding chapter. Amy comes out on top after her epic defeat in chapter 14 where she came so close to victory but fell short. Cathy has a strong will, to be sure. But partaking of Amy's breasts after making her forget probably wasn't smart, as it fed her own addiction and weaknesses. As Amy remembered everything upon the elapsed time, Amy could see that they could be friends, but she also saw Cathy's continued and abiding weakness for her breasts, be they powered up or otherwise. I liked how Amy was able to deconstruct and defeat Cathy in a battle of words. For once, Amy was able to use a loophole, presumably in that Cathy wasn't operating from fully altruistic reasons assuaged Amy's own guilt enough to resist the programming to obey? At least with the added knowledge that Cathy WANTED to lose. Loved the final scene, though the idea of Cathy becoming a cheerleader was alluded to earlier, it was fun to see in reality. I wondered if some time had gone by, with Cathy being made to forget a couple weeks or so as Amy's slave and reawakened as a cheerleader? In large part as ordering a new cheerleader uniform might take awhile? Cathy might have been made to later remember following Amy around, begging to be made a cheerleader! LoL Probably might not work what with the subsequent chapters though. Amy had best be more cognizant of what she is doing, but she might want to keep Cathy on as her personal assistant--she could use one! Hmn? a competition between Cathy and nerdy Beth for the role? LoL I hope for a 'happy ending', I just don't mind if there is still a lot of spice as well as sugar.
larqven
2016-12-21 21:44:40 +0000 UTCHonestly think it will be Amy that fixes this in the end... hopefully.
2016-10-16 02:55:46 +0000 UTCthe tables have turned at last! i can't wait to read more
Natasha
2016-10-15 13:22:36 +0000 UTCGood chapter but I hope Cathy has some final trick up her sleeve. I was teased with the nice happy ending I was hoping for and then it was dashed this chapter.
M H
2016-10-11 04:04:51 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, but I love that last scene! Need more!
2016-10-09 21:39:39 +0000 UTCMy emotions, MY EMOTIONS!
Devi Lacroix
2016-10-09 06:15:17 +0000 UTC7-8 more to go. MATH! ;) :P
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2016-10-09 03:03:40 +0000 UTCOmfg
2016-10-09 01:49:32 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved this chapter! So, 5 more to go? Great! Still, nothing compares to Slaves to the Snake Goddess to me :)
Anonymous Coward
2016-10-09 00:26:45 +0000 UTCWhat a delightful plot twist...
ParagonRocky
2016-10-08 22:31:31 +0000 UTCCathy finally wins! ;) :D Although I'm still holding out hope that Brooke and Ms Trabdal and the cheerleaders etc etc all get out ok.
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2016-10-08 19:02:40 +0000 UTCOOOOOOOOH.
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2016-10-08 19:01:23 +0000 UTC
