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That's not Wizard Magic! Ch 26

Chapter 26 (~10k words):

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where's chapter 25?

MoonLord

Hmmm. I'll admit that I'm a bit disappointed Andromeda/Ted are still together, as a Narcissa/Andromeda/Tonks combo would be nice (compared to some of your other fics). That being said, I do hope Ingvild gets to be one of his pawns. If possible, maybe he meets Meredith Ordington after she was kivked out of her magus association and before she turned to that evil alliance. She'd be neat to include and open normal human magecraft to everyone.

Gr1ffin

It would be nice to have Daphne and Tracy as Knights while Jasmine become a member of Sona.

Neko

I like Lily as his queen. I think Jasmine definitely deserves a shot for his peerage though. I do think Pavarti, Ginny, and Lav would be better as contracted magicians. They all have family and deep connections to the mortal world.

Panda Daoist

For parvati and lavender I would see them under contracts his steps fighting and basic girls he is focused on fashion he has something not to forget his that if parvatie has a long life she will surely ask for padma his twins does not neglect his for ginny and jasmine can be or sona or rias can take them in their pearry harry must not end up with witches leaves him with 2-3 more special girls

yan boul

For parvati and lavender I would see them under contracts his steps fighting and basic girls he is focused on fashion he has something not to forget his that if parvatie has a long life she will surely ask for padma his twins does not neglect his for ginny and jasmine can be or sona or rias can take them in their pairing harry must not end up with witches leaves him with 2-3 more special girls

yan boul

Uh. I thought for sure harry would eventually take Sona as his queen, since you can take other devils into your peerage. Sairaorg’s queen was a high class devil herself and almost all his peerage members are devils too.

Christian E. Y.

I think the sisters would be better as knights, have them be super mobile ranged nukers with a focus on augmenting their veela fire till its concentrated like a beam of devastation, just a thought.

MogulTheSly


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