The other day I posted the first 30 mins of the doc I'm working on. Looking for more criticism and input. Please check it out and let me know!
Added 2023-09-02 03:01:19 +0000 UTCComments
1. I thought by BLM you meant Black lives matter, maybe emphasize that its Bureau of land management. 2. Some of the music could be better. Maybe more of a mysterious vibe? or darker. I do understand the struggle of getting good copyright music tho fo sure. 3. Tighter transitions throughout cuts. Bro but other then that. Fire so far, you are by far my favorite YouTuber and this vid is lookin so good so far.
sunnysalt
2023-11-07 00:01:56 +0000 UTCI have some questions. I don't know how to feel about these people. Is this some stubborn rich prick that wants to grass feed his fancy cattle on public land to get richer? Is he the last rancher holding out because of tradition or greed? If Uncle Sam wiped him off those acres should I really care? I don't think I would. The world changes. I don't think I want wealthy people treating federal land like it's theirs. Am I supposed to be sympathetic to this struggle because law enforcement is mean? I don't know man. Maybe I should pipe down. The execution is great and I don't know if it's proper to cast anyone as the antagonist or protagonist when making a documentary. I'm curious to hear how you feel about it, but editorializing would change the documentary that I haven't even watched all the way through. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to seeing if my opinion changes of the situation.
Aaron L
2023-09-23 19:44:24 +0000 UTC
