New Mini Comic Project - FULL COMIC

I'm working on a collab mini comic with brokey_toy, and you can already check out the first three pages that I've created! We're both looking forward to publishing it very soon.

But we've made some revisions to the script, and brokey_toy has helped me adjust Selen's dialogue to make it more accurate to her character.

Here's the old script:

The Starry Night: Red and Selen's Talk About Home

1

(Setting: Red and Selen are sitting on a blanket or the ground(?), looking up at the stars) . Red is wide-eyed with wonder and curiosity, leaning towards Selen in excitement. Selen is proud and nostalgic, with a small smile and a distant gaze, looking up at the stars.)

Red is wide-eyed with wonder and curiosity, leaning towards Selen in excitement.

Red: (excitedly and happily looking at Selen) Ooh, Selen, can you tell me more about your home planet? It sounds sooo exciting!

2

Selen: (smiling warmly, looking at Red) Of course... Dominica is a tropical paradise with lush plants and a greenish-lime sky. It offers endless wonders to explore, including giant vegetation, beautiful flowers, and many rivers and insects.

3

Red: (looking at Selen with enthusiasm) What about the creatures who live there? Are they friendly?

Selen:(sarcastically) Friendly? Hell no. There are those damn snake people. They're violent, resistant, and their bites are fucking deadly as hell. I despise those filthy suckers.

4

Red: (gasps, looking worried) Oh no! How do the people there stay safe?

Selen: (sighs, looking away with a smile) It's not easy, but they're a tough bunch. Some people hunt the creatures, and everyone lives in wooden villages or tree houses.

5

Selen: But despite the danger, there's a strong sense of community and everyone helps each other out.

Red: (smiling shyly, looking down) That sounds sooo brave. I don't think I could ever live in a place like that!

6

Selen: (smiling at Red, reassuring her, eyes shining as she says "my home") It's not for everyone, but it was my home and I loved it. But I'm glad to be here with you now.

Red: (smiling, looking at Selen with admiration) I'm glad you're here too.

(Both Red and Selen gaze up at the stars, sharing a moment of connection and appreciation for each other's company.)