AmongUs Story Part 74
Added 2022-12-12 01:41:35 +0000 UTCI hope you like it♥
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I'm open to criticism and appreciate your honesty. I don't care if you like my OC's or not, everyone has a different opinion. You love them or hate them. That's perfectly fine. However, I should mention that Coral did not lie to Cobalt in any way. Maybe you misunderstood something. Cobalt wants to help Coral because he admires the fact that he wants to rescue Red. Since the last time Coral tried to convince Rose to come along, EZ'NOZ has ambushed the spaceship and killed everyone. None of them know that EZ'NOZ are already on the spaceship and that the Ruler has fallen in love with Red. They don’t know that Red is save. Both assume that the EZ'NOZ will come soon and kill Red. I wanted to tell you this because you thought Cobalt "just" had changed his mind. He had a reason. However, criticism aside, I don't understand how you view the construction of characters, stories, and lore as a waste of time. So much happened that is important for the story. Everything can't go fast without introducing the characters and their stories the way you want them to. In movies, you don't save someone in a minute or kill the bad guy right at the start? Right?
Chudraw
2022-12-13 12:04:49 +0000 UTCYeah, true, I was pretty harsh but it's my critic side but no worries, It's pretty, but at least you understand my probléma about the overhelmed time-wasting in this story. About Cobalt I cannot say anything, I was hope about he will make sense into Coral's brain but now he's into something what he's fighting for just because some lying excuses bring idiot like my Azul Blue, so the second most disappointed character made me hate gim for good reasons. Yeah, just F for hím.
Judynator
2022-12-13 11:44:47 +0000 UTCOh wow, I wasn’t expecting that. That’s a very harsh comment. My Main Comic isn’t about just love. It’s about the aftermath of the war and the problems that humanity and EZ'NOZ deal. Also, It’s impotent to me that I build the characters and their story’s. That’s why it takes time.
Chudraw
2022-12-13 04:54:20 +0000 UTCThey won't save but kidnap also so fuck Cobalt even you like it or not. Disappointing fat bastard
Judynator
2022-12-13 03:44:50 +0000 UTCStill fuck all of them. I cannot even sleep because of it. Alsó I feel since parts of 50s the story won't going anywhere but wasting times. I want White save Red finally, the story is about their love! Sorry, Melissa but fuck Cobalt and Coral, tó the hell with them
Judynator
2022-12-13 03:43:56 +0000 UTCI have confidence in Cobalt that he won't let Coral go down the kidnapping route, let's just wait and see what Chu has planned. If anything, I think those 2 are going to come to Red's rescue from Gray/Navy
Melissa Zmek
2022-12-12 21:36:11 +0000 UTCAww, don’t worry ❤️ Haha
Chudraw
2022-12-12 19:41:25 +0000 UTCNow fuck you both Coral and Cobalt, DIE!!! Please doN't make Red kidnapped, but saved by Ehite! PLSPLSPLS!!!
Judynator
2022-12-12 19:37:43 +0000 UTCOhh 😂❤️
Chudraw
2022-12-12 12:03:20 +0000 UTC😊❤️
Chudraw
2022-12-12 12:03:07 +0000 UTCDarn it, I ship them now xD
Roachbaby
2022-12-12 09:12:10 +0000 UTCDamn Coral, what the heck! XD and of course I will always love our fav cinnamon roll Cobalt~
Melissa Zmek
2022-12-12 04:53:02 +0000 UTC
