Foreign Temptations Ch. 02 (Official!)
Added 2024-10-26 00:45:09 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note: If you catch any errors
Comments
great chapter! expected it to be longer.. can't wait to read the next part of the story
shaw921212
2024-11-04 10:45:13 +0000 UTCncie !! can't wait for tje next one !
Xalnoc
2024-10-27 10:27:32 +0000 UTCgood chapter. maybe it's a regional thing, but 'kick the bucket', in my experience, means 'to die', not 'to go to sleep'. "feeling a familiar, stiff prod her crotched" I think there's a typo or two there. Raj says, “We couldn’t continue this… indefinitely.” I think you meant for him to say 'could'.
LH_reads
2024-10-26 14:45:21 +0000 UTCWanted it to go on and on. Good job.
John Lewis
2024-10-26 12:28:45 +0000 UTCShorter than I expected but no less awesome. Honestly want more of this as a priority tbh
Me
2024-10-26 04:58:29 +0000 UTCI think it was good but not great there could have been one more sex scene
Samshady
2024-10-26 04:50:14 +0000 UTCI love it! I can't wait for more!
Hope Ambition
2024-10-26 02:37:04 +0000 UTC...still reeling from teh sheer intensity of what.. "teh" → the
Volkfly
2024-10-26 01:39:02 +0000 UTC
