Rite of Passage: Saving Ben - Part 5
Added 2024-12-09 19:09:56 +0000 UTCHi, everyone!
This is the official fifth, and final, part of my fan-favorite feminization comic!
The comic is called Rite of Passage: Saving Ben and this part is the conclusion to Freddy's, and Ben's, tale. This spin-off story is a few parts longer than I thought it would be, but I had fun revisiting the story and wanted to do it justice. It has a bit of an open-ending in terms of whether Lilly helped her father with his schemes or if she was just a pawn in them. Let me know what you think!
Please feel free to leave any criticism or suggestions in the comments below as I am anxious to hear what other people think about it!
~ Sammy xx
Comments
Thanks I got a ton of ideas
Zombieman
2024-12-11 19:49:12 +0000 UTCSomething I think is original and that you would also enjoy! π
TheJarad101
2024-12-11 19:23:28 +0000 UTCThis is a really good idea! If I ever revisit this story, I will definitely consider writing something along these lines. You have real talent for story telling!
TheJarad101
2024-12-11 19:20:59 +0000 UTCHope the next part the father gets his his comeuppance. Like it turns out Lily was secretly studying how to fix both brothers and she needed to test on her father to see why he had such a high resistance. So she made a super strong version of the stuff and it had 10x the effect on the father.
Zombieman
2024-12-09 19:28:28 +0000 UTCWhat is the next story going to be?
Fiddlepopstoop
2024-12-09 19:20:28 +0000 UTC
