Octavia 2.0 - Feedback Appreciated
Added 2023-01-26 12:07:59 +0000 UTCHey Supporters,
To start off, Jinx and Octavia were extremely close in the last poll. If you consider the Patreon poll and the SubscribeStar poll, they're right at about even. So I'm just going to do both. We'll see a Jinx render soon.
I have here some concept art for a new Octavia. She's got a little of old Octavia sprinkled in. Her body and face are shaped differently, and she has different hair. If you feel like she could be done better, or if you feel like she isn't quite right, please let me know. Comments appreciated.
She has more youthful features, but still that very milky skin. I tried to go for more of an angelic vibe. If everyone likes this new model, I'll do a sexy render of her. Let me know in the poll and in the comments what you think.
Thanks for the support!
Comments
I'll chime in on the slightly older features - she looks very young to me.
Kevin Matheny
2023-01-27 02:37:04 +0000 UTCWhen looking at original pictures of her introduction scene, I don't see a significant difference in her figure compared to this image. My $0,02 would be to stay with this figure, and if the face doesn't match age-wise with the rest of the body; perhaps change the face a little.
BaeScout83
2023-01-26 20:43:28 +0000 UTCI think dropping her a cup size is reasonable. I'm of the mind that slimming her much elsewhere isn't necessary, at least based on this one image - personally I like the look of a lush set of hips (especially if the waist above is trim! Gotta love those hourglass figures). That said, Octavia's backstory suggests she'd have a body that leans more towards "athletic" than "centerfold," even if she's no longer in the same line of work she was when she first met Penny. From that perspective, slimming her down some in exchange for some more muscle tone would make sense (a nice set of abs on a lady is also very hot!) On the gripping hand, comparing old and new just now, it actually looks to me like you've kept pretty close to the kind of figure Octavia had before. So if your aim is to keep the changes to a minimum, you should maybe leave the body sliders alone. ETA: Oh also, I think you did a FANTASTIC job with her face (also the subtle, "well helLO..." expression is great), but I wouldn't mind if there were hints of age added - nothing dramatic, just convey the sense that she's in the neighborhood of her early 30s, instead of early-to-mid-20s.
Taellosse
2023-01-26 16:51:22 +0000 UTCAgree with the other comments. Just no ridiculous balloon looking tits and ass please. Unless it is a fantasy game, I prefer realistic looking characters. She looks really good.
Whatsupdoc214
2023-01-26 15:59:38 +0000 UTCLike the new texture but breasts could go down a cup or so.
Blkcrow820
2023-01-26 14:07:30 +0000 UTCOctavia hasn't had any children. I can definitely trim her down. I'll try that. Thank you for the feedback. π
Lockheart
2023-01-26 13:41:19 +0000 UTCI would say keep the body if she is supposed to be a MILF, but if she's just in her 20's... I've at least never seen anyone in their 20's with a body like that. And sadly not a woman that's had two kids with a face like that :) BUT, im a found believer of the developer doing what he wants. If this is how you see her, then this is how she is :)
RexArmand
2023-01-26 13:33:14 +0000 UTCSo maybe the breasts are a little too large? Slim down the body?
Lockheart
2023-01-26 12:53:04 +0000 UTCI'd like to see the whole body, unless the focus was on just above the waist. When you first said Octavia, I thought Warframe and got really confused when I saw Lockheart lol. The proportions look fine to me, sure she's stacked, but imo that balances the more modest other models. I could be wrong, but unlike the other comment, she looks like around a 38"DD to me. Big for sure, but not ridiculous. It ain't Anri Okita big from where I'm looking. She's got that naughty teacher look, and I'm all for it!
Mangetsu
2023-01-26 12:44:23 +0000 UTCI like her in general. Never quite understand why it's so popular with FFF size boobs, but that's just me :) I think her complexion makes her face look 24-26 yo and her chest is 38yo after two kids, so either a young looking MILF or a nice face with saggy tits :P So basically, for me the head and body dont match.
RexArmand
2023-01-26 12:32:14 +0000 UTC
