Pages 475 & 476 sketches and script!

So, I warn you that my script for most pages is literally just the dialog lol. But it's still kind of interesting to see what it starts out as, or if I made changes. Also, looking this over, I forgot to put the Red Moon logo on the mugs lol

Page 11:

P1) Malaya: “We have nothing. I can’t believe we’ve been at this for so long and we have nothing.”

P2) Elias practically asleep on his book. “Set the house on fire. Just burn it to the ground.”

P3) Charlene: “Can’t. That place is fireproof until Connie’s practically dead. She won’t give up that protection spell.”

P4) Everyone at the table. 

Malaya: “Can we just…invade the house? The vines are coming from somewhere inside. Where Connie is, probably.”

Elias: “Connie can control my grandma…that’s a horrible sentence…which means she can enthrall anyone even sort of related to the Ross pack. Grandma still counts as an alpha.”

Marisa: “With the council in the way, none of the other packs nearby will want to get involved. We’re uh,too…messy.”

P5) Marisa & Elias:

“My magic can’t reach far enough to break Connie’s hold on that weird werewolf kid. He’s practically dead, so now would be the best time to free him.”

Elias, still practically asleep: “Throw him. They should just throw him to you. ‘Cross the yard.”

Marisa: “Uh, maybe? (Do they even have the strength for that?)

Page 12:

P1) Elias: “I have nothing to offer. I’m so exhausted it feels like my bones are gonna fall out. I can’t free the werewolves from the house and the vines…

Even if I could transform, it’s not like I can attack a house. All I can do is read these damn magic books, and I’m barely awake enough to do that. And I don’t know shit about magic.”

P2) Mal: “More coffee.”

Elias: “Caffeine works so much better when I’m more human-y and less werewolf-y.”

P3) Malaya and Elias: “Doesn’t your mom have a landscaping business? You could raid her stuff for something more powerful than some rusty tools. That would help keep the vines away, at least.”

Elias looking perkier: “I…could do that. A few gas-powered string trimmers, maybe a chain saw…”

P4) Charlene drinking coffee in Red Moon mug “Weed killer?”

P5) Elias & Marisa: “Uh, does weed killer work on magic vines?”

Marisa: “I’ve never tried to kill anything magic with industrial chemicals, but uh…I guess we can try it?”

Elias: “Mom only buys organic herbicide.”

Marisa: “Oh, that’s neat.”