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He Maid Her Fall V0.6.6 – Tispy (5$) tier [English/ 简体中文]

Hello, everyone. As usual I’m both lazy and working all day at the same time. Some kind of Schrödinger shit.

Here are the things added:

+ 11100 new words (total: 141k)
+ 3 CG sets (total: 42)
+ 2 lewd scenes (total: 16)

I don’t have much to say. I also worked all day. It’s a bit… embarrassing, but I worked a bit too much on that stupid commentary, and now I’m running out of steam.

In December, if I don’t take a break, He Maid Her Fall will become the main project. I’m hoping having the story go faster will help with some of the issues with the pacing. There have been a few discussions on Discord about how much this feel like a mother NTR. Some think it’s not focused enough toward Kate, which is fair.

Still, I’ve noticed that He Maid Her Fall has been more popular than my other projects, so I guess I must be doing something right.

In any case, I was supposed to take a few hours to re-read and not embarrass myself with bugs and shit, but I instead put that time in the commentary. So yeah, retarded, I am.

You are welcome.

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Changelog V0.6.3
Story

- Added 3 CG sets
- Added 2 lewd scenes
- Added 11100 words to the story

He Maid Her Fall V0.6.6 – Tispy (5$) tier [English/ 简体中文]

Comments

I love this story let’s go on I will always waiting for this game 🤘🏻

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Idk what exactly was said in the Discord, so I can only comment on my personal point of view on the matter. I can see where they're coming from tbh. This is basically the first project where the secondary FMC has had such a strong presence from the get go. I've said it before, but this is the first project where I felt that u(H self) have nailed the role of a secondary FMC. Meaning that at some points in the narrative, she takes away the attention from the main dish and provides a completely different path. On the other hand, I can see how this can be a problem for ppl that simply do not FCK with Lesley whatsoever. And even if it's not about liking her or not, I can still see where they're coming from cuz, at the end of it all, it comes down to preference. I personally like the dynamic she creates, where it feels like we are bouncing from character to character every other update. And while some might think this doesn't make it a mother NTR, I just think that it makes it something more than that. Since this is basically a mom NTR and a BSS all at the same time (btw maybe BSS is not completely accurate, but I digress). Anyways, I just wanted to say... nice update. I don't have much to say about it tbh. This project makes my heart ache whenever I'm just playing the protagonist's POV only, and it is focusing on Kate. Knowing that every time our guy reacts to Kate's attempts of making him jealous is actually what is dragging Kate down more and more (we just don't get to see it yet) is fcking painful, in a good way of course cuz this is NTR at the end of the day. To keep it short, I just wanna comment on the second Kate scene of the update. First, I think there should have been quick flashbacks of her first night at the hotel with Mr. Bully. This has been done a couple of times before, but for some reason, it was not done for this one when she was clearly saying that that night was coming to her mind. Adding those quick flashbacks could make this scene a lot better. And I say that cuz I personally found this scene incredibly underwhelming. It is not a bad scene, but when considering that it is the first raw sex scene? It is definitely underwhelming. Maybe it's because it wasn't a double scene sequence. It was just a one shot scene and that was it. It felt like it came out of nowhere, no build up or anything, and then it ended as fast as it came. I apologize if I sound too harsh, but those are my genuine thoughts. That's all I personally wanted to say tho. I rate this a 5/10. The low score might look deceiving, cuz it is not low cuz it is a bad update, but because a 5 out of 10 is the best number I can use to describe this update. Just a 50/50 split. It didn't surprise me or drive me, but I had no sense of it being bad or boring cuz everything is still advancing. So for me, it was just an "alright" update, a middle ground if I had to call it some way. That is all. I'm looking forward to whatever is next, keep on cooking!

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