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What story of mine would you like me to continue most?

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Thanks for the feedback! I really enjoyed writing that story and I have thought about going back to it. Ciri is a joy to write, and her trysts with Mikael were some of my favorite material to work on. I do have a massive backlog of stories to get through, but I could return to it eventually, or someone could commission me for more if they really wanted to

Et2bruttus

I need more of Ciri and Mikael in "She's Not in That Much of a Hurry...Again". It was a very well-fleshed out relationship. And I really love how you touched upon elements about Ciri's past, and how wars were fought over her reproductive system, which led to her not wanting kids... or did she??? The fact that Mikael enters her life, and everything changes, makes for a compelling story. And, honestly, I think there is so much more that could be delved into. For instance, in the last chapter, you jumped from the two being in Novigrad to them settling down in Toussaint weeks later. But... what about their travels together? What about Mikael seeing parts of the world that not very many people get to see? Other dimensions? And their relationship... When does Ciri mentally acknowledge, to herself, that she loves him? When does she say "I love you" for the first time? When does she discover that she is pregnant? How does she feel about the actual finality of being pregnant? How does Mikael take the news? I'm rambling... But you get what I'm saying. They were both fleshed out extremely well in the story, as it already is. And there is the potential for so much more.

Cmann1887

Amen 🙏🏻

Hunter

I didn't know so many people were into Intergalactic Mate Swap, tbh. Pretty interesting to see. I might need to revisit it at some point

Et2bruttus

I loved those two because of the premise and the plot.

Mr M

Intergalactic mate swap and waylaid

Mr M

Intergalactic mate swap

Hunter


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