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ノリコン NORICON
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful message! I really appreciate your understanding and the way you expressed your opinion so respectfully. I totally get what you mean—the subtle transition from consciousness to unconsciousness can be very effective. While my personal preference leans toward keeping the expressions a bit more composed, I'm always happy to hear other perspectives, and your suggestion was genuinely interesting. Thanks again for sharing it so kindly!

ノリコン NORICON

Oh, I understand. I also don't like it when girls completely roll their eyes when they faint (like what happened in Rinka's flashback). That's why I thought maybe a short panel beforehand with their eyes rolling, followed by the character fainting with their eyes closed could be an option. But I respect that something like that isn't very much to your liking, and I appreciate you taking the time to respond.

Fargo-Art67

ありがとうございます。 鎖による首絞め。皆さんの期待値が高いですね!👍

ノリコン NORICON

ありがとうございます。 凛香登場の時に持っていた鎖ですよね。 めんどくさくなって、途中で書くのやめちゃったんですけど…再び登場です😅

ノリコン NORICON

Thank you for your thoughts! Personally, I prefer not to use the “eyes rolled back” expression, as I don’t find it very aesthetically appealing. So please don’t expect too much of that in future scenes—I hope you can understand my artistic choice!

ノリコン NORICON

You've probably already drawn the scene where Gold faints. But I'm thinking about using the parts where the girls faint, where they have their eyes rolled back in their heads for a moment before closing, just like in Eri's first fight when she fainted from the bear hug. I think it's a nice touch to show that they were completely unconscious. I'd like to see more of that.

Fargo-Art67

残酷で魅力的

Mardy Thailand

りんかちゃん、君は半分善人で半分悪人だけど、悪人じゃないよ。

Mardy Thailand

りんかちゃんはルイちゃんの首を鎖で縛りました。りんかちゃんの顔はすごく険しく、すごく嬉しそうでした。

Mardy Thailand

お疲れ様。 気になっていた鎖の伏線が解けますね。一体それで何を?

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