Thank you so much for your thoughtful message!
I really appreciate your understanding and the way you expressed your opinion so respectfully.
I totally get what you mean—the subtle transition from consciousness to unconsciousness can be very effective.
While my personal preference leans toward keeping the expressions a bit more composed,
I'm always happy to hear other perspectives, and your suggestion was genuinely interesting.
Thanks again for sharing it so kindly!
ノリコン NORICON
2025-09-17 12:36:25 +0000 UTC
Oh, I understand.
I also don't like it when girls completely roll their eyes when they faint (like what happened in Rinka's flashback). That's why I thought maybe a short panel beforehand with their eyes rolling, followed by the character fainting with their eyes closed could be an option.
But I respect that something like that isn't very much to your liking, and I appreciate you taking the time to respond.
Thank you for your thoughts!
Personally, I prefer not to use the “eyes rolled back” expression, as I don’t find it very aesthetically appealing.
So please don’t expect too much of that in future scenes—I hope you can understand my artistic choice!
ノリコン NORICON
2025-09-17 00:47:00 +0000 UTC
You've probably already drawn the scene where Gold faints.
But I'm thinking about using the parts where the girls faint, where they have their eyes rolled back in their heads for a moment before closing, just like in Eri's first fight when she fainted from the bear hug. I think it's a nice touch to show that they were completely unconscious.
I'd like to see more of that.