Yalli Vore Pack? I Need Some Opinions

With the Egg Thief finished I was thinking about the next potential vore pack. I had a lot of fun developing Yalli for her Last Night series, and I thought about taking it a step further. My plan was to show a date from start to finish: she meets someone at a bar, she goes to their home, eats them, and lives in their home until the bills pile up. 

Because work and school have picked up again, I have much, much less time to dedicate to a large project. Though that might work in my favor. This image is so fuzzy right now because it would need like 8 hours of rendering to clear up. I could set up a scene and go to work, or go to sleep, and my PC will render it while I'm away. The end result should actually be quite good. This is by no means a short project though: I was planning on three 'chapters' of comic book style pages with text. 

With such a big project I was trying to do some pre-planning, and I ran into a few snags that maybe you guys can help me with:

First off, Yalli does tend to be more on the NSFW side, but I see a way to make this potentially SFW too. Would you guys be interested in two versions, a SFW one and NSFW one? Or should I stick to one or the other (or somewhere in between)? Yalli is not going to have sex with her prey, but there is the potential for a lot of teasing. Maybe some dildo play even?

Secondly, I was curious about this scene featured above. This is definitely not your ordinary bar. For some backstory, Yalli comes here often for some...lets just say...exotic drinks. Her future date has seen her come in here a few times, so he makes a move to come in as well. He is not interested in whats served here, so he invites Yalli to his house for something a bit more normal. You can get a better context of this bar scene here:  https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36218589/ 

My fear though is this scene could be a turn off to some. I know that fetishes have to push the right buttons, and a wrong button can be a deal breaker. I'd love your thoughts on this scene: is it interesting to you? Do you just not mind it? Or is it one of those, "my eyes are burning, plez nu," scenes?

Let me know what you think in the comments below. I'll also attach the raw render in case you'd like a closer look. And, just cause I have it, I'll put the 4K version of that bar scene too.