Looking for Feedback on Naomi Mini-Comic Concept
Added 2018-02-20 13:47:03 +0000 UTCHere's the dropbox link you can see the sketches.
I've been wanting to do little Naomi comics for a while but my sketches always end up too long, This one started as a 2 page idea that ended up 7 pages, but i can accept that.
I'm looking for any feedback you have. What you like and don't like, etc. Cause i'm trying something that doesn't seem common which is kind of PoV personal feeling kind of thing. So i'd like feedback on how to improve that feeling.
Don't expect a particularly high quality when i properly draw this, i'm working on it in the spare time of my spare time so i'm going to want it done quickly but still look good. I just want to get more Naomi content out XD.
Anyway, I look forward to your feedback!
