SUPERSIZED Pages 15-18
Added 2017-11-05 03:11:04 +0000 UTCHARROW!
Welcome to November's early access to Meatier Showers: SUPERSIZED. Starting this month, you'll get to preview not just 2 comic pages, but 4! That's way ahead of everyone else! As mentioned before, all the pages below are works-in-progress, and we'll be revisiting the dialogues and illustrations eventually. For now, please enjoy:
The "monster" monologues are still clumsy at this point, at least in my own personal opinion, and I'm hoping to revise them to something less tacky. I may even choose to remove the whole thing if it proves too unwieldy.
Comments
Masterfully done!
Urulai
2017-11-07 14:54:31 +0000 UTCThis is still looking so amazing!! I like the monster monologue myself.
Kindle Foxfire
2017-11-05 16:33:30 +0000 UTCI'm a huge fan of the pacing and the composition of everything! Plus, the humor of the lil guy commenting about the speed of vaporization...always need that bit of comedic relief! I really like this group of pages, excited to see the progress as you revise them ^^
Dandicoot
2017-11-05 03:19:28 +0000 UTC
