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Arc 1 - Chapter 15 - Freya Gambit

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Hello everyone, LunaWolve here!

Welcome to the release of Chapter 15 for y'all.

Before we get into this chapter, please be aware that chapter 10 (Harsh Reality) was just released on RR and features a medium-sized, MAJOR revision, that will likely be story relevant for the plot going forward. 

You can find the link to the chapter on RR right here. 

The information featured in the revised chapter 10 will not come into play in this chapter (15), specifically, but will be referenced in chapter 16.

As such, you can wait until Friday to read up on the changes, but I would recommend checking them out before the Patreon chapter release of that day.

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The changes to the chapter were prompted, as I spent some additional time thinking about when things would make sense to reveal, but realised that the perfect opportunity (and time to do so) had already passed with Chapter 10.

If there are any questions about the revised chapter, please leave them on the corresponding RR chapter. I will get to them as soon as I can, together with the rest of the RR comments.

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Now onto the meat of this post! Chapter 15. 

This chapter features a couple, more in-depth, PoVs from different side characters that A: either haven't been introduced yet or B: have not played a major role so far.

The intent behind the PoVs is to break up the monotone descriptions of "Thea fights, and then fights some more" while giving a deeper insight into how our MC is perceived by the people around her, including a variety of initial perspectives (Positive/Negative towards her).

With a wider world to explore in general, more characters to interact with and impact, Thea will unquestionably be part of a lot more side characters' views and thoughts. Thusly, PoVs similar to these ones will likely become part of the story at a slightly increased rate going forward, compared to the rate at which they appeared during the prologue arc (arc 0). 

That concludes the mandatory lead-in for this chapter!

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Only got one thing left to say: I hope you will enjoy the chapter!

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Seeing Thea assume a low, nearly crouching stance in the centre of the arena in preparation for the first round to begin, Astra could not help but marvel at her form.

Astra's eyes remained glued to Thea as she maintained her low stance, the air in the arena charged with anticipation. As the buzzer sounded, Thea shot forward with incredible speed, closing the distance between her and Lan in the blink of an eye.

Astra was amazed at how Thea seemed to dance around Lan, evading his chainsword swings effortlessly and using her smaller, more agile frame to her advantage in such a way.

Despite being in the same class as Thea, being around the same age and with a similar background, being a mid-worlder herself, Astra felt like she was watching someone from a different species entirely. Thea’s ability to perfectly stay out of reach for each of Lan’s brutal-looking strikes was a testament to her incredible forethought and control over her own body, something Astra had always struggled with in her own combat exercises.

'Her form is just so… perfect! I’ve never seen anyone fight with two knives like that; it’s like they’re a part of her body, rather than weapons wielded by a Marine… My sword style would not stand a single chance against her, whatsoever...'

As the fight continued, Astra's admiration for Thea only grew stronger. She was awestruck by Thea's strategic thinking and her ability to adapt to her opponent's movements in real time, despite the doubtlessly stressful balancing act she had to nail to keep up the pressure without being caught by one of Lan’s strikes.

Looking in from the outside and sharing a similar combat style to Thea, Astra could quickly tell that all of her moves were calculated with an uncanny precision. Pure luck or instinct would never be able to cover the large advantage that Lan’s superior Strength afforded him in a hand-to-hand match like this, after all.

She couldn't help but hold her breath as Thea dodged yet another powerful swing from Lan, her body twisting and contorting in seemingly impossible ways to avoid the deadly chainswords, as if it was the most natural thing in the world.

Up until this point, Astra had thought that Strength builds were inherently superior to Dexterity for close-range combat, but seeing her idol effortlessly dodge, contort, and twist through the oncoming assault of attacks, hope regarding her own Attributes blossomed in her heart. Inspired by Thea's performance, Astra resolved to push herself harder in her training going forward and attempt to emulate Thea’s graceful and fluid, yet deadly combat style.

She had been awestruck by Thea the first time she saw her on the podium the day before. A mid-worlder in Alpha Squad…! Not just any mid-worlder, but an undercity, cyan mid-worlder.

While Astra had initially been hesitant to look up to her as a result of that fact, having been told of the terrible things that undercity cyans were known for during her early years of education on Novaria, Thea’s showing on the podium had quickly changed that attitude.

The mixture of obvious apprehension at being there, coupled with her more than impressive demonstration involving the major, had quickly changed Astra’s opinion of the cyan undercity girl. Others in her little mid-worlder clique were still apprehensive towards Thea, but Astra was determined to change their minds… especially after this class!

For her, Thea was a shining example of the heights that even mid-worlders could achieve, despite all the prejudices levelled against them. After all, if even an undercity cyan like Thea could rise to such heights, why shouldn’t they be able to do the same?

Even if the inner- and core-worlders in her class mocked her and the other mid-worlders or looked down on them, having Thea and Isabella in Alpha Squad was a clear testament to the folly of their thoughts - that mid-worlders were somehow inherently inferior to them.

She was further amazed at how Thea seemed to anticipate Lan's next moves, always staying just out of reach of his weapons, regardless of how dangerous a given swing seemed to be. It was as if Thea was simply toying with the intimidating, hulking man.

When Thea timed her moves just right to exploit Lan's vulnerability and injure his arm, leaving him visibly frustrated and off-balance, Astra could not help but yelp in surprise at the sudden change in the fight. This opening should not have existed!

Astra herself had not been able to find any opening in Lan’s defences, much less such a devastating one, despite her best attempts at doing so. Although Astra was an outside spectator, she had somehow been less capable than Thea, who was in the middle of a fight for her life, at spotting this minuscule chance.

With sparkling eyes, Astra followed the rest of the fight, as it was clear to her that Thea had already won the first round with that last decisive strike. Being injured in such a way, Lan was obviously unable to keep up with Thea who rapidly closed out the round with another incredible gambit by throwing her knife to distract Lan, and get close enough for the kill.

Seeing the spectacular finish to the first round, Astra jumped up in joy, unable to contain her excitement. As she was clapping and celebrating Thea’s first win, Astra suddenly realised the looks she was getting from her fellow Marines around her, who all seemed to be taken aback by her candid show of support for the winner of the first match.

Feeling slightly embarrassed by their glances and the fact that she had so openly shown her support for her idol, Astra lowered her hands, smiled sheepishly, and said, “Ah… My apologies…” while trying to regain her composure in the midst of her fellow Marines.

Looking back towards her idol inside the arena, she saw Thea casually walk back towards the centre of the arena, readying herself for the second round by entering, what looked to Astra like some form of meditative stance. Astra quickly returned to her previous spot close to the blue barrier, anticipating the beginning of the second round with bated breath…

Feeling a familiar tug at his mind, Lan suddenly found himself standing near the equipment racks inside the arena. Shaking off the slight disorientation caused by the reset, which he was keenly familiar with from the previous two years of basic, he knew what it meant for him.

'Damn it… She completely beat me in every regard… I just can't believe how natural her movements are! I figured, having trained all of yesterday evening to get my new body's Attributes under control, that I'd have a leg up, but compared to her, I might as well have completely wasted my time… It's like she has years of experience fighting with an enhanced body like this. Just how in the Emperor's name is this even possible…?!'

Looking over towards his adversary in the centre of the arena, who was similarly observing him as well, his frustration at the loss of the first round intensified.

'She isn't even winded… Just what do her Attributes look like?! And I haven't figured out her Ability yet either… Fuck.'

Realising that standing near the equipment rack, looking stunned by the outcome, wouldn't do him any favours when it came to his peers' perception of him, Lan moved back to the centre of the arena with measured steps, while trying to formulate a plan.

'I can't be defensive against this monster. She'll simply take me apart, slowly but surely, like she did last time. So full offence it is. I can't hold onto my Ability anymore either. I need to win at least one round; even if I end up out of Stamina by the time the third round comes around, I can't afford to lose against a mid-worlder 0:2… If only the rest of the guys were in here to actually fight her, they'd understand…'

With a deep, inward sigh at the fact that his clique's peers had such a strange, hardline obsession with mid-worlders being brought into the UHF Marine Corps having been a mistake, Lan prepared himself for the next round.

He briefly noted that Thea was still missing her second dagger, which had been left exactly where he had deflected it towards during her final attack.

'Looks like she's resourceful enough to use the arena's functions to the fullest, too… Alpha Squad is no joke, alright.'

Having come up with a rudimentary plan for the second round, Lan walked up to the starting position, indicating to Thea that he was ready to go again with a wave of his chainsword.

With an acknowledging nod, his adversary took her strange, crouched stance once again, before the countdown appeared between them. At the same time, the discarded dagger of the previous round, which had been lying next to Lan's starting position the entire time, suddenly disappeared and materialised in Thea's left hand.

They had shared no words since the very start of the first round, and Lan's respect for the mid-worlder before him inevitably rose another notch upon realisation. She was a real fighter at heart. Someone who understood that when it came down to it, blow-for-blow, there was no need for idle chatter or banter. All that mattered were the actions during the fight; that was their language to converse in during this bout.

Smiling slightly to himself upon realising this, Lan thought about how none of his peers seemed to understand this basic idea of duelling, yet claimed to be superior to the mid-worlder before him. He focused his mind on the battle ahead, swearing to himself that he would do everything in his power to win this round and hold nothing back.

Lan knew that this resolve was not just for his own sake, but also as a show of respect for his opponent, who had quickly demonstrated how wrong he had been to underestimate a member of Alpha Squad.

As the countdown reached the last second, he prepared himself to receive his opponent, anticipating that she might repeat the same, extremely fast, dash-in start from the previous round.

As the countdown reached zero, Lan's muscles tensed, ready to spring into action the moment Thea made her move. He was determined to win this round and prove to himself that he could adapt to her exceptional fighting style. The energy in the arena was palpable, and Lan could feel the eyes of his fellow Marines watching their every move from the outside, ultimately unable to fully remove the spectators from his mind.

Just as he had anticipated, Thea launched herself forward with lightning speed, replicating her dash-in start from the previous round. Lan, however, was better prepared this time.

Instead of being taken aback by her speed, he used his own strength and agility to respond, swinging his chainswords with precision and power, aiming to intercept her as she closed in.

As the chainsword sliced through the air, Lan noticed that Thea's movements were slightly different this time, perhaps anticipating his adaptation in advance. She nimbly weaved around his attack, her smaller frame once again proving to be an advantage in dodging his powerful swings. Despite her evasive manoeuvres, Lan could tell that she was being more cautious, likely aware of his newfound determination.

Lan refused to let this deter him. He pressed on, relentlessly attacking Thea with a barrage of chainsword swings, each one faster and stronger than the last, determined to follow his more offensively-oriented plan he had prepared before the start of the round. He figured that the key to defeating her lay in pushing her to her limits, forcing her to make a mistake or expose a weakness.

After all, he just needed to connect a single strike to win the round.

As the battle raged on, Lan found himself gaining ground, slowly forcing Thea to retreat as she continued to dodge and parry his onslaught. He could feel a newfound sense of confidence surging through him, fueling his resolve to win this round. Every time their weapons clashed, sparks flew, illuminating the arena with a brilliant display of their intense combat.

Once again, Lan found himself in awe of his opponent’s ability to fully utilise her heightened Attributes. He was unable to detect any wasted movements in her feints, dodges, and parries. 'How did she get used to this body so quickly? Does Alpha Squad have access to a training room with the time dilation tech Major Quinn mentioned?!'

As Lan continued his aggressive barrage of chainsword strikes, he began to feel the weight of his heavy armour, which had been dutifully protecting him from Thea’s relentless counterattacks.

'I'll lose if I continue at this pace,' he thought. 'She might not seem like she has a ton of stamina, but her ability to conserve energy with her efficient movements really makes up for it. If we were fighting a couple of weeks down the line, once I’ve learned how to use this new, enhanced body, I might even be able to beat her outright. But as it stands, I'll run out of steam before she does.'

Realising that he needed to alter his attack pattern to speed up the fight's conclusion, Lan pushed his body forward into Thea’s range, trusting his heavy armour to withstand the brunt of her retaliatory stabs and slices.

Lan noticed Thea's eyes widened slightly at the sudden change in his fighting style, further convincing him that he was on the right track to overwhelm his opponent. As his attacks grew more ferocious and his persistent forward movement pushed Thea further back, he finally detected a pattern in the way she parried his strikes.

'That's it! When I attack with my left sword, she parries downward instead of to the side...!'

Unable to fully conceal his excitement at the sudden revelation, Lan smiled as he continued to relentlessly swing at Thea's retreating form. After confirming his suspicions with a few more combination attacks, paying extra attention to how his opponent parried his left-hand strikes, Lan became confident in his plan.

During the next combination attack, just as he executed his left-hand strike, he mentally commanded the System to activate his Ability.

Surging Strike

Seeing Lan’s typical end-of-combination left-swing come towards her, Thea prepared herself to deflect it towards the ground, as she had been doing for the entire second round.

He’s definitely running out of breath very quickly, this time around. Leading him on into being more aggressive, by continuously falling back and giving him ground was definitely the right call, he’s exerting himself a lot…

When the chainsword had nearly reached her and Thea twisted her upper body to increase her leverage on the incoming strike, she suddenly felt an intense pang of danger in her chest. A pang she had become all-too-familiar with in recent times.

Unable to detect any changes in Lan’s typical attack pattern and the left-sided swing at a glance, Thea immediately activated her System Ability.

Sensory Overdrive.

As time seemed to slow down around her, Thea was able to observe her enemy and her surroundings with heightened care and focus. Initially unable to detect any changes in her opponent, she turned her attention to her surroundings to determine what had triggered such a strong sense of danger within her instincts.

The arena's bright lights shone down on her and Lan, casting sharp shadows on the ground. Behind the shimmering blue barrier that separated the two fighters from the audience, she could see a crowd of fellow Marines watching the ongoing battle with bated breath. Each onlooker's face was a mix of anticipation and curiosity as they observed the intense match.

She could see beads of sweat on their foreheads, a testament to the sheer tension in the air, created by the brutal showdown before them. Some of them clenched their fists, while others whispered to each other, speculating about the outcome.

Despite Thea's heightened awareness and careful observation of her surroundings, she found no obvious threats lurking nearby. All of the Marines behind the barrier seemed solely focused on the fight, with no signs of malicious intent or hidden weapons. The arena itself appeared to be secure, with no obvious structural weaknesses or hazardous elements that could pose a danger to her.

Thea’s gaze swept across the floor, walls, and ceiling, searching for any indication of a potential trap or hidden danger, but came up empty. The environment seemed as controlled and predictable as it had been since the beginning of the fight.

With no discernible threats around her, Thea realised that the source of the danger her instincts warned her about must be coming from Lan himself and the incoming swing on her right side.

She instantly knew her deduction had been correct, when the chainsword connected with her knife just moments later.

Previously, Thea had been able to easily deflect Lan’s swing towards the ground, using their relative heights, the angle of his attack, and her high levels of Dexterity to leverage more of her upper body weight to push the oncoming strike down.

But this time, she felt as if she were trying to redirect an incoming grav-train.

The chainsword didn't react to the initial contact between itself and her knife, spelling grave danger for Thea, as her defence for this type of attack depended entirely on her ability to deflect it away from her.

Wide-eyed, Thea scrambled to come up with a viable strategy to escape the situation, as the unstoppable swing slowly plowed its way through her attempt at redirection.

Desperate for a way out, Thea's mind raced, searching for any possible solution to escape the relentless force of Lan's attack. Her heightened Perception and Dexterity worked in tandem, giving her just enough mental agility to come up with what she hoped was a last-second solution.

With only fractions of a second to spare, Thea made her move, acutely aware that her Strength was unlikely to meet the requirements of what she was attempting to do.

Summoning every ounce of Strength in her body, Thea pivoted onto her left foot, throwing her body off-balance, away from the incoming swing, to avoid the full brunt of the chainsword's strike, while pulling her right arm back towards her body, mid-deflection.

As the powerful swing tore through the air and connected with her body, which was now in the process of falling in the opposite direction, Thea fervently hoped that Lan’s Dexterity was not high enough to adjust the direction of such a brutal strike, mid-swing.

At this moment, her ‘Sensory Overdrive’ ran out as well. For Thea, the world suddenly felt as if it had been sped up by a factor of ten or more, making the incoming strike seem all the more deadly and brutal, as it seemed to instantly reach her.

The chainsword relentlessly cut through the air, its teeth gnashing and grinding as it connected with Thea's right arm.

The force of the swing, coupled with the rapidly moving, deadly chains of the sword, easily ripped through her armour, tearing apart the protective layers and sinking deep into her flesh. The pain was instantaneous and searing as the chainsword continued to rip through her right arm, cutting a swathe of flesh and muscle from her body.

Unable to hold back a scream of pain, Thea cried out as the chainsword finally left her right arm.

While her last-second reaction had saved her from being cut in half, her right arm had been utterly savaged by the chains of the weapon in Lan’s left hand. Thea was certain that she could still move it, to some degree, but her combat power had been significantly reduced as a result.

With the chainsword now covered in blood and gore, Lan looked at the falling Thea in front of him with a mixture of confusion and surprise. It was immediately apparent that he had not anticipated Thea to be able to survive the strike, as his right-handed follow-up swing, aimed at the still falling enemy, was just a fraction of a second delayed.

Racked with severe pain and an equally severe feeling of nausea due to the after effects of her ‘Sensory Overdrive’, Thea quickly rolled her body away from Lan, as she finally reached the ground, leaving behind a trail of blood and gore where her maimed right arm scraped across the ground.

Realising that she wasn't out of danger yet, Thea immediately jumped back up to her feet, readying her only remaining dagger in her left hand to counter any incoming follow-ups from Lan.

Despite the nausea and pain, Thea's mind raced to come up with a viable plan to regain control of the fight.

'That's definitely his Ability. Whatever that strike was - there's no doubt. If I can't deflect or parry those strikes, what am I supposed to do?! Does it have a cooldown…? My Abilities don't, so I'm going to assume his Ability also doesn't have one. I can't risk getting hit by that again… I also need to finish this fast; I'm losing way too much blood…'

Rapidly dodging the incoming, increasingly more accurate swings from her opponent, Thea left behind a veritable torrent of blood flowing from her right arm that seeped into the floor of the arena at a rapid rate.

The shock-absorbing material of the arena floor was now stained crimson and had a slightly damp sheen to it, as the two combatants continued their deadly dance across the arena.

I don’t think I have another choice… I don’t have enough time to come up with anything better, right now… Freya Gambit it is…

Determined to win the round, despite her dire circumstances, Thea took a couple deep breaths, as she mentally and physically prepared herself for what she was about to do.

Meanwhile, Lan’s face was showing a continuously increasing amount of frustration, as his swings were just barely missing the retreating Thea, again and again.

When he tried to push up towards her with his superior Strength and speed, Thea circled around him with her high Dexterity. If he tried to counter her Dexterity with his own, he lacked the fine-control over his Strength to make up the difference.

His only real retort was to continue swinging for her, forcing her to exert herself immensely as she continued to bleed from her maimed right arm, waiting for her to finally slow down enough to get a solid hit in and end the round.

Having gathered enough courage and dealt with the initial bout of nausea and pain from her previous miss-step, Thea channelled down her Perception towards Lan’s incoming swings, with a renewed precision and focus.

I only get one shot at this… I need to find the exact right swing that will leave his neck exposed from my left side…

Over the next few combination swings from Lan, Thea focused intently on the exact position of his body, his arms, his weapon and his neck, as she tried to deduce the perfect way to make him overexert his reach in just the right way for her gambit to succeed.

Unfortunately for her, she felt her vision turn blurry about three combinations in, as her blood loss was taking its toll on her body, which she continued to push past its limits to keep herself in the fight.

Fuck…! Alright, all or nothing, Freya Gambit, don’t let me down now. You’ve won me so many Championships…!

Realising that she had no more time to spare, Thea suddenly ducked underneath Lan's next swing, instead of circling around him as she had done in their recent exchanges.

With widened eyes, Lan's follow-up strike from the left side was slightly misangled, having fallen into too much of a rhythm from the chase, allowing Thea to twist her body around the attack without harm.

His third swing, another right-sided one, similar to the one that had initially maimed her, bore down on Thea's position with overwhelming force and speed, as she gritted her teeth for her ultimate gambit. Raising her maimed right arm towards the incoming chainsword, as if to grab it out of thin air, Thea jumped towards Lan with all her might, hoping that her opponent had not activated his Ability quite this early into the swing.

As her gauntlet connected with the chains of the chainsword, she inwardly breathed a sigh of relief, as it bent slightly backward from the force imparted upon it, with the full weight of her body pushing towards it in an attempt to deflect it one last time.

Simultaneously, she screamed out in indescribable pain, her vision going blurry, as the infinitely fast, rotating chains of the sword ripped through her gauntlet as if it was made of paper, flayed the flesh from her hand, broke every bone inside in an instant, and continued to work its way through her entire right arm - destroying everything in its path with uncaring, brutal efficiency.

Her gambit, however, had paid off, as Lan's swing was deflected away from her just enough to let it pass through her entire right arm, ultimately cutting it into a million pieces and ripping it from her shoulder, instead of ending the fight then and there.

As Thea's jump landed her directly next to the surprised and awed Lan, she pushed her failing body one more time, as she rammed the combat knife in her left hand into the weak point of his armour that protected his neck, just like she had done in the first round.

The arena buzzer signalling the end of the round rang almost immediately and was the last thing Thea heard before she blacked out from the overexertion, blood loss, and pain that ravaged her body and mind.

One last thought passed through her mind as the darkness took her - a memory of her first ever attempt at the ‘Freya Gambit’, as it was later named by the community.

Freya, her all-time favourite character in ‘Ashes of Centuries’, had inspired Thea to find unique ways to play her in order to win different championships and competitive matches. Simply playing her like everybody else was not an option if one wanted to be exceptional, after all.

Thea had come up with the strategy as a result of Freya’s unique passive skill, ‘Berserk’, through which she would gain increased attack power based on a percentage of her missing health. It had generally been considered a bottom-tier passive, as it didn’t provide any advantages to the player if they were doing well. Nobody wanted to get hit in AoC, after all.

The Freya Gambit, thus, had been quite simple yet ingenious in the eyes of the player base at the time.

Thea would find a moment in the fight when the opponent seemed to have the upper hand, and she would go blow-for-blow, sacrificing her own HP in droves to create a nearly guaranteed opening.

Due to her passive skill, Freya would continue to grow stronger as her opponent grew weaker, allowing Thea to snatch victories from the jaws of defeat many times. She would strike at the opponent’s weak points in the last moment before her own death, using the vastly increased stats from her passive skill to land a critical, final blow.

It was generally considered a massive gamble later in the game’s life, as the enemy player could simply pull back from the blow-for-blow exchange and take the free damage on Freya if they realised quickly enough what the Freya player was attempting to do.

The first time she had ever used it was during a championship game in the golden age arcade back on Lumiosia. She had been matched up against an Argus ‘the Demon-Lord’ player, one of Freya’s best counters.

Pretty much everyone had assumed she would lose as a result, but during the final moments of the match, Thea had brought out the Freya Gambit for the first time, having theorycrafted the strategy for months beforehand.

The many sleepless nights she had spent staring at stat sheets, attack multipliers, and scaling coefficients for every character in AoC to figure out against which character it would potentially be effective and at which percentage it would be most effective had borne fruit in that moment.

The spectators, commentators, and even her opponent had been absolutely floored by the self-sacrificing move that had ultimately won her the championship.

The recordings of the match had been circulated around the galactic net for years to come, with many players picking up Freya as a result. The fad quickly died off, however, as barely any player managed to pull off the Freya Gambit, not realising the amount of effort, care, and attention that had gone into Thea’s strategy.

With a last pained, smile at the memory, Thea’s thoughts went blank, just as she felt a tug at her mind…

Comments

Awww she's made a fan in Astra, also potentially a friend who dosn't want to dissect her.

Will C

It is fairly unlikely that this will be the case (at least purposeful training), due to the nature of the training involved. Vitality and Recovery training is BRUTAL beyond compare. Unless Thea somehow becomes immune to pain, I don't think this will happen.

LunaWolve

I wonder if Thea will train her Vitality and Recovery to their max base value.

Trasen56

Definitely true. Grabbing the chainsaw was a lot more gruesome and intense. Definitely not for the faint of heart. 🤣

The Lost Pages

That's pretty much what the UHF aims for with the 2 years of basic. Most of the UHF Marines, at the moment of integration, are around the max of human possibility. How much each stat gets enhanced on top of that then, is based on the System Aptitude of each person, as determined by the Allbright System itself. Most will end up with a 3~, rarer ones with a 4~ and the ones that get special rarity Abilities get a 5~ somewhere, but lose out on a 3~ in another stat, to compensate.

LunaWolve

I agree with this, a Summary of the changes that affect story.

Hammy

Lmao, woops. Thats what I get for going off memory. You mentioned earlier that max human is ~2.5. What would happen if someone was initialized into the system with their stats all at the theoretical max?

Trasen56

Very true on the part about Lan's ability. Similarly to how she came up with a last-ditch gambit in jumping INTO the swing, in order to redirect it BEFORE he could use his ability, she'd definitely be trying to come up with other, less self-destructing, counters as well.

LunaWolve

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LunaWolve

Glad to hear that!

LunaWolve

There's a slight mistake here: Thea's Strength is at a 3. Her Vitality and Recovery are at a 2. She's essentially a real-life glass cannon build, with no innate defenses to speak of. --- The absolute measure is indeed across genders. It considers all of humanity as ONE type, regardless of biological differences. --- Generally the "max" base stat would be around a 3. Some might be able to get up to 3.5~ or so, but it's extremely difficult. Different stats don't TECHNICALLY have different limits, but training some stats is VASTLY more difficult than others (see: Strength vs Recovery/Vitality, for example).

LunaWolve

Ooohhhh the WRIST....! Easy mistake to make. Wrist and Chainsword sound so similar, after all!

LunaWolve

Pretty good summary! His name's Desmond, by the way, lol.

LunaWolve

My best guess is that when initialized she was above average in everhthing except maybe vitality. The system then decided to boost certain stats more while leaving others untouched. So the 2 in strength and vitality is what she earned through her lifestyle and training. But then it idk how the system decides who geta large boosts to certain atritbutes and who gets small boosts across the board.

Trasen56

Dude you pointed out the same shit I was thinking when she first got integrated it made no sense, like all her stats make no sense to me she should be above average on them all because she grew up in a very dangerous area and fought and even killed on occasion she should be stronger.

Jonathan Walker

Main one I noticed was this: The first guy that speaks against Cyans (Dawson or something cant remember his name) says that something feels wrong when he looks in her eyes and that its probably because she cannibalized her moms soul with the cyan solution. Isabella agress that there is a wrong feeling when looking into her eyes, but says that his theory is far fetched though not provably wrong. Corvus tells her that while her eyes do spark feelings of oddness for him, its not wrongness, and he finds it interesting. Thea thinks that could be part of the reason Kara was so interested in her eyes. I'm paraphrasing, so its possible this isn't 100% correct.

Trasen56

Anyone who can give a summary of the changes? I’m sure many of us would appreciate one.

n

@LunaWolve, comment on sensory overdrive Now that she has experienced it, I expect Thea could start to come up with ways to counter Lan's skill. Considering her higher dexterity and relatively comparable speed to Lan, one thing she would likely start to do is use footwork to make herself seem closer to Lan than she actually is (essentially keep a wide stance, so her backfoot is far away, but your front foot is close to your opponents. If she needs to appear even closer, she can lean her upper body forward but be ready to lean/leap back) and long guard tactics (keeping one or both arms extended to let her make contact with Lan's attacks sooner and begin her parries as soon into his attack as possible) to allow her earliest contact with his strikes to detect if he is using the skill and as much distance as possible to dodge it if he is. This would likely earn her quite a lot of hatred from some marines because she would seem like she is retreating most of the time rather than engaging, but it would allow her to win the fight in the long run. Lots of out-boxers have used these types of tactics against strong punchers (Ali, Shakur Stevenson, etc)

Trasen56

Thea, Thea your supposed to grab your opponents wrist or arm not his blade. :) It will be interesting comparing her rewards versus Karas and others. If rewards are based on risk, she was risking the reputations of herself, Alpha Squad, Major Quinn, the UHF, and even that of the system itself. I hope those that grouse behind her back have to step up or risk system penalties. Playing it safe probably isn't a good move for system warriors.

Aguy768

@Jon's 1st comment: I think the reason Thea mentions her strength limited her reaction to Lan's skill is that strength is the stat that governs explosive movement, so as Thea trains and improves her strength she will be able to do more during the 'bullet time' due to having faster response from her muscles.

Trasen56

I'm very interested in this garunteed 2 mentioned in na earlier comment chain. Thea has an absolute measure of 2 strength, below average for a marine. I am going to assume that average is across both male and female marines, but if average stat distribution differs between birth sex then that changes this a little. I assume Thea tried her hardest at every aspect of basic, including ohysical training. It was already mentioned that Thea has a calisthenics (?) routine taught to her by James, and he also kept her properly nutriated (is that a word lmao) giving her a solid foundation. So unless Thea is really, really short (I do remember her mentioning how tall the officers were, but don't remember if that applied to the rank and file), I find it surprising she is below average in strength. If you start with a solid foundation then add 2 years of proper strength training you should easily reach your natural plateau. Given another couple years (6 mac) you can reach your max strength. Presuming that the system is not physically keeping her strength from surpassing 2 (which she probably would've noticed during basic) she should definitely be around 70-80% of her pre-system max strength when she was killed. Does this mean that when the system boosted her base stats it chose to ignore strength in favor of other stats? That could make sense as 2.5 was max human acheivement iirc. This would mean that once Thea starts hitting the gym her base strength should shoot up from training right? On that note what is the max "base" stats possible from training, not counting the allocated points? Is it different for different stats?

Trasen56

I agree with James' second comment. A brief summary of major changes could be useful, especially said changes affect the patreon release.

Trasen56

Thanks for the chapter really enjoyed the multiple POVS

Jacob

I liked it

gabriel johnson

I mean I did reread it but I don’t think you need to put every change. I would advise maybe a summary of any change that affects the story in a big way and advise people they can reread the chapter to see any further updates you mean with how you portrayed the change.

James Nagy

Very true, Benji!

LunaWolve

They're in alpha squad because they have a high system score, not because they're better marines. If one of them got a high score in the cube for genius strategy they'll get pummeled in any kind of combat.

BenjiVoid

I was considering that, but a lot of parts changed. I would've had to copy/paste like half the actual chapter here to get all the context and changes put in here. I think re-reading the chapter is the easiest way, but I'm open for ideas?

LunaWolve

I would recommend in the future just giving us a update of changes to the chapter instead of having us go read it a second time so we know exactly what changed etc.

James Nagy

Thank you for the kind words! Can't wait to get the next one finished up and to you!

LunaWolve

@Quendolayne Well from what LunaWolve has said this wasn't actually an average opponent (top 10% is nothing to sneeze at, even if Alpha would be top ~0.5% based on LunaWolve's comment for Ch13 that class size is ~900) And when the option is "Gambit and win by dying last" vs "go to round 3, risking loss and make it seem like Alpha Squad is overhyped (or at least I am)" while knowing that any damage taken while winning this round (since it is a Match victory) will be healed, then victory at all costs is better than a chance at defeat. Especially since she'll get a reputation for "Attacking right after her arm got cut off as if it didn't slow her down"

Jon

Amazing chapter!! Can’t wait for the next one!

Thomas Downing

Thank you, Sir!

LunaWolve

good commie

LunaWolve

Ha, glad to hear that! There's more of those coming in the next chapter or two as well. Practical class is pretty ruthless, after all!

LunaWolve

yoo that's so epic, i love seing fights like this :3

Kilian Rode

@Quen, Thea does indeed have 2 'realms' of weakness. Simultaneously however, she also has 2 realms of power. It's all a balancing act from here on out. Her matchup against Lan is probably one of the worst she could have run into, as her own unique Ability does exactly NOTHING to save her from getting cut in half by a surprise attack that she already sees coming. The problem she ran into with his particular Ability, is that it doesn't cause anything to "happen", so to speak. There's no visual or audio indicator for her to react to, so the only way she could have known the attack was different from usual, was exactly the way in which it happened - by touching the swing itself. By that point however, due to her, comperatively, low Strength/Dexterity, she had no way to fully escape the attack.

LunaWolve

This is correct, on the Sensory Overdrive explanation! It exclusively bumps her Perception stats by 500%, as well as providing the mental capacity to process this, making it possible for her to: - Detect things more accurately and from further away. - Think at high speeds, to come up with courses of action at a moment's notice. - Prime her muscles and body to react in the way that she wants. What it does NOT do however, is bump up her actual speed of reaction or movement. Meaning that even if she sees an attack coming, such as Lan's swing, she can't simply evade it. Her Dexterity and Strength stats are vastly inferior to her heightened Perception (Perception would be at an equivalent of 25~, while her Strength and Dexterity would be at a 3 and 4 respectively) so all she can do is prime her body to move a certain way and hope for the best.

LunaWolve

@Jon: Yes, I agree … against a high value target it is worthwhile … but she needed it for an average opponent. So her ability is perfect for sniping but only average for melee.

Quendolayne

@LunaWolve: I read you, but I would like to point out that her weakness was not detecting the skill or disengaging quick enough. She waited to long until the unknown hit her and then her Vitality stat hit. Beside that, doesn’t 2x2 double her weaknesses? Wouldn’t it mean she can be successfully beaten in two “realms”? … I guess, I’m just disappointed that she was seemingly easily bested and was expecting that she would be able to avoid the attack due to her ability. At the moment, I fear, the other marines see her as an glass cannon aka a paper tiger.

Quendolayne

My take on her Sensory Overdrive/Bullet Time is her perception improves (Until Luna tells me I'm wrong). So she can see and think at high speeds, and apparently (if only due to her stats) react more quickly. On it's own it doesn't let her move any faster than outside of her ability, but on the other hand being able to react super fast is useless if your thoughts can't keep up with your body. A Pyrrhic victory in a duel where you get healed once the battle is over has no real 'cost'. Her gambit won't do much good in most situations since having to pay the respawn fee to defeat an average opponent isn't worth it. Using it to deal significant damage (or defeat a superior foe like the Captain in her Trial/Mission) when there isn't anyone better suited to taking on the job on the other hand could turn tides.

Jon

Very true! Although "surviving" is a bit of a strong word here. The chance for anyone to simply overtake them in the first week is nearly non-existant, considering that they were also far-and-away superior to their peers, when it came to the initial assessment trial. Every single person in Alpha Squad is exceptional by definition, in all regards. While they're more focused than their peers in the Corps, that doesn't mean they lack in the other regards. Their primary weakness is their one stat that'll guaranteed be at a 2. This is not something I have specifically pointed out or explained yet, but in order for them to have a 5 somewhere, they need to have a 2 in another stat. That's the reason Thea has 2 of them, as well. 2x5 means she also needs to have 2x2. Beating Alpha Squad in a straight-up fight would generally require the 'average' Marine to take advantage of that weakness, which is actually exactly what happened in the fight with Lan. Thea's weakness is Vitality, after all. So getting hit and losing a bunch of blood, is exactly what she is the weakest against. If she would've had a 3 or even a 4 in Vitality instead, the hit would've merely disadvantaged her, rather than crippled her to the point of having to go for a risky gambit to end it quickly.

LunaWolve

So they ‘just’ need to survive the initial onslaught on their position. I can’t wait to read how that pan out for Thea and Kara.

Quendolayne

They DO all come with exceptional Attributes. This is primarily what the UHF is propping them up for. With access to the System Store, to shore up their niche Abilities with more generalized ones, having exceptional base Attributes is a massive gain in the long-term.

LunaWolve

Thx you just answered my question about the power of her ability. Not sure if it make sense to build niche players up to quasi idols. They will fall quick when out of their niche and end up second rate in anything else.

Quendolayne

As Major Quinn said during the opening ceremony, most of Alpha Squad's abilities and attributes are VERY niche, compared to the more generally useful stuff that you'd end up with at Copper/Iron rarity. Abilities play a major role in System Combat, so for Thea, who has an ability that REALLY isn't made for hand-to-hand combat, she's facing an uphill battle, anytime she fights someone with a more direct combat ability. Lan would've been in the upper percentages of the Marines, maybe top 5-10%. So it's not entirely representative of the "average" Marine, but a good comparison nevertheless. Alpha Squad is simply the best of what they have at the moment. They aren't invincible (although Isabella would like to have a word with me about that part assertion, I'm sure)

LunaWolve

Thx for the chapter … it shows that Alpha Squad can be bested by “seemingly” anyone else. Her opponent wasn’t someone special or? Not like someone who just missed Alpha Squad? This means in this melee situation she isn’t really Alpha Squad material - sacrificing herself to win a fight isn’t just good policy for a run of the mill opponent. What will happen if she get to the real good opponents? Will she be then just ballast for Alpha Squad? … I mean her opponent should just had let her bleed out and there would be nothing she could do, effectively she lost this round and got lucky with a dumb opponent. … Additionally, if her Sensory Overdrive is like bullet time, can’t she use it to kill her opponent instead of sight seeing in the middle of a fight? Or is it just seeing more details, which would reduce the effectivity of this ability in such situations further.

Quendolayne

good chappie

Isley

Lovely chapter, and even lovelier cliffhanger for how the System rewards innovation/success (I'm assuming)

Jon


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