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Tentative E3S Edit

So I spent some time trying to organize certain events through this video so that you could feel our progression rather than being pulled from near completion to a phase 1 wipe. I also put certain gags together to have their own spotlight rather than constant callbacks that spanned anywhere from 5-15 minutes apart. I feel that the flow is better, but I'd like your opinions before I start putting characters and text in which are much harder to reorganize in the software. At the very least, there's a much higher chance of errors if I do that later rather than sooner. I normally don't do this, but since the video is SO long, I want to do everything I can to make sure it's as good as possible from the get-go. Hopefully it gives a fresh look at things too so you can still enjoy it.


Now is the time where critiques and suggestions are welcome since I can still do things to adjust them. I'd appreciate them more now than later, at least lol. Thanks for the help in more ways than one, everybody. Hope I can get this thing done soon. ^^;;

Tentative E3S Edit

Comments

I enjoyed it! At first I wasn't so sure since these videos normally have been showing the progress you guys make as the video goes on. But when I watched it I felt that the flow of it still felt really solid! I definitely loved the Corey fail compilation xD

HyperX39

I actually like it this way, i didn't see any errors. I wish it was longer, there are so many good moments, but i understand why you have to cut down.

Honestly, it seems pretty good as is. I watched it side by side with the Director's Cut, and I was looking for the cut aways/edits, but I'll watch it fresh tomorrow and I'll bet I won't even notice. There were some clips that I wish you kept (Jesse's "Damn it feels good to be back", the rest of your failed revenge, Rhaya's moaning, Hans' "I'm a professional" to Tate's "Depression", and a couple of others I forgot), but I trust they were removed for a reason (If I had any talent for calls like that I would be making videos ;)). All the rest seem rightly cut; either dry call outs or conversations between pulls. Which are good for extended cuts, but probably not the main video. All in all, everything seems good to me!

TheFoxsCloak


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