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Duellist 27

AN: I split this from the last chapter thinking

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Can greg use both of his Tinker powers at one on a build. Or is it restricted to one power at a time

Ganhuyag Erhembileg

I wonder if Armsmaster will ever use his lie detector on their discussion. I wonder how Miss Militia would react...

TroubleFait

Some live reactions: "God, I'm funny." Oh my fucking God, Greg, shut the fuck up! "I just need to keep channelling the wise, veteran leader-figures from my games and my approval rating with her is going to skyrocket." I just can't be ready for this. You get me every time. This guy really is a piece of work. Some corrections: "see no chance in the modifiers" -> no change "I wouldn't ditch you just because I found our your real name." -> found out

TroubleFait

This chapter was a monster. • Great fight, with Arachne being a badass as always. • Surreal ramblings of Greg to the simulated Squealer, Greg will always remain a mental case indeed. • It's nice to get to know Miss Militia a bit, and I believe the companion bonus did a little in letting her connect to Void Cowboy earnestly. Despite her faults she's a good person. • That heist scene with the flashback in between real time, delicious. The conclusion with Squealer hit by Skidmark hits hard. • And finally, Taylor. Everyone likes Mush, but she's my favourite. It was absolutely beautiful.

TroubleFait

https://xkcd.com/771/

Sesquame

Fantastic chapter, but it kind of took me out of it when Squealer said "porn-brained incel" as that's LATE 2010s to 2020s slang. Incel would be a niche word in 2011 and hadn't been appropriated by opponents into an insult yet. I don't think ANYONE had used the term porn-brained. Now, Greg is extremely online so it makes sense he knows words like tsundere and incel before normies at large, and this is technically a projection of his power, but it's supposed to be [REAL] Squealer and seems out of character for her. Not that a woman in 2011 wouldn't be totally creeped out by Greg's monologue, but would instead call him something like a "porn-addicted creep" or even something worm-specific like "Heartbreaker wannabe". Just a thought.

Heyoyo

Also, did some rereading and here's an ironic quote from Chapter 17: "Naughty Taylor. Don't you know that NTR is a trash fetish?"

Maxim

Good to see Greg coming -- ha! -- around to being the bigger -- ha ha! -- man w/r/t the Taylor situation, especially as he's done it in the most Greg way possible. "If mercy is for the strong... then I ought to be the most merciful!" *limited terms and conditions may apply

n0us

Miss Militia must be really beating herself up about making Arachne release the mundanes and then failing to contain the capes five minutes later.

Joshua Graham

This was genuinely great. Glad to hear you're wanting to blaze forward with updates, heartening to hear.

Quato

Greg gets new powers, new Merchant contacts, a load of Tinkertech loot and even a personal development!

Maxim

Cant wait for the taylor and sophia trio

Guillermo Vasquez

Just get a Blaster power! It's that easy!

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