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「メンタルトレーニング」"Mental Training"

Sorry for the very late posting of the illustration...! Let me know if I've translated it into English incorrectly! 2024/6/19 日本語版もこちらに追加しました。 2025/3/14  I corrected some of the text. Thanks for letting me know!

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Sorry for the late reply...! Thank you for taking the time to look at my illustrations! And thank you for letting me know about the mistakes in the English text👍

書記隊

I just discovered your content a few days ago and noticed a minor spelling error in the English version of this. You wrote: "I have hypnotized Miyata many times since he was a freshman, calling it a cool down." But probably meant to write: "I have hypnotized Miyata many times since she was a freshman, calling it a cool down." It's just a tiny typo where you wrote "He" but probably meant to write "She", since this is clearly about the girl and not a man. Just figured that I'd point this out. I really appreciate you providing an English version for your art.

I_have_no_Idea

Sorry for not updating for so long ...! I'll try my best to upload the illustrations by the end of this week!

書記隊

Hi, it has been a month since your last post Hope everything is ok Looking forward to your next illustration 😊

rth627

Thanks for liking my comic! I'll try my best to come up with the rest of the comic while I'm trying to make the illustrations faster👍

書記隊

You definitely should continue the story! Trust me, its an amazing one! Also, I am really glad you like these ideas! You are the best! And don't worry if you take some time, I am someone who appreciates quality over quantity 👍

rth627

Sorry for not uploading the illustrations faster ...! Thanks for suggesting these fascinating ideas! I like the idea of Hazuki putting Riko to sleep, it's a nice reversal of positions. I like the idea of them hypnotizing each other and getting back at each other, so I'll consider the idea of having Riko hypnotized or put to sleep as well, if I decide to continue the story! I think I will draw another new illustration of a girl being put to sleep with chloroform, so I would like to take special care in drawing the process of putting her to sleep👍.

書記隊

Glad to see you back! In case you need an idea for a new illustration, I would love to see some girl-girl chloroform action. Maybe as a continuation of your previous comic. I imagine something like: Hazuki: I love how Riko played with me while I was hypnotized, I would love to do her the same. But I don't know how to hypnotize someone.... Maybe I can try some chloroform on her Next day she invistes Riko to her house telling her she wants to be hypnotized, but before Riko has a chance to do so, she chloroforms her (or gives her a drink with sleeping pills, I also enjoy that) Well it is just an idea, hope you like it 😊 Either way, if you go with a different story, I would just love to see one of the girls slowly falling asleep while trying to fight the effects the drug, and then of course some limp play.

rth627


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