I finally finished redoing the first page of this; I knew the first one was bad, but... once I did this, I realized it was VERY bad.
The shading was horrible, the angles didn't make sense, and Bui's hair... Just... his hair... >~<
On that note, if anyone ever notices things not looking right with my work, please don't hesitate to point it out! May not be able to fix it every time, but it would help me greatly to improve. ^^
Also started lining the second page of this, so that should also be ready in the near future~
Not sure yet if I'm going to attempt cell shading, or do flat color for the rest, though...