Important! π¨ Fireside Fascination at 70%
Added 2023-09-27 02:42:07 +0000 UTCThe moment has come!
It's time to watch all the scenes together β¨ As you can see, all shots have been polished a bit more! There is still work to do (Especially in Sequence 3 as you will see) but finally you can have an idea of how the whole animation is looking and how is gonna look π
The sound design on the sex scenes is pretty rough yet! We will be working on it during October! Big props to our voice actor @Phosphorus_VA who is giving life to Oliver!
Kahl has already started with Sequence 4! So expect some wips soon :D
It has been a real journey! We are on the final run to finish this animation. It has been very fun. As soon as we have a little more progress on Sequence 4, we will reveal the official release date!
This has been possible thanks to your support! <3
-Mentita and Kahl
Comments
Oh yeah! There will definitely be a confession from Luke, we are currently writting and refining that dialogue. Regarding your comment on the "gay sex" dialogue. You are right, it comes out as confusing. We wrote it like that to accentuate the irony of Luke being "the straightest guy he ever met" and then giving him the "best gay sex" he ever had. We are playing on that dicotomy of heterosexual and homosexual sex. But now that you mentioned it we realised it would be better if Oliver said those two lines a little closer together. Maybe that could help. There's currently a pause that may make that point be mixed. Thanks for your feedback, Tom! It's hard to write dialogues since there are a lot of connotations we might miss.
AwArdiente
2023-11-18 01:45:16 +0000 UTCJust looked over the animatic. Really good. I think an extra scene of Oliver and Luke together at the end is a great to tie things down. Doesn't even have to cum to a conclusion, just has to come out of Luke's reluctant confession of his feelings for Oliver, and the shared delight in finding out it's mutual. Also, at one point Oliver says it's the best gay sex he's ever had. I would leave out gay, because it suggest he might have had straight sex that was better. The story line is that Oliver's unexpected realization that his feelings for Luke have crossed over into of love, leads to a wild sexual encounter that forces Oliver, and then Luke, to acknowledge and accept their feelings for each other. I think that would be better expressed by Oliver saying it was the best sex ever in his life, period.
Tom Noyb
2023-11-13 16:43:06 +0000 UTCAlso, just in case it's been missed, here you can find a link to the animatic in which you can see the idea we originally had for the final animation: https://www.patreon.com/posts/fireside-81675294 We have already decided on some changes to it (like including an extra scene at the end with Oli and Luke together) so, as soon as we finish the climax scene, we will be working on an updated preview of it and show it to you all so you can give us your thoughts on the ending sequence which will tie the story and characters down ;3
AwArdiente
2023-11-13 00:18:07 +0000 UTCThanks for your comment! We are very happy to know that you are invested in the story and characters and not only the sex part. The reason the beginning is now different than the trailer is that we decided to slightly rewrite and move the dialogue to the end since we felt it worked better for the narrative.
AwArdiente
2023-11-13 00:16:51 +0000 UTCEchoing KB. I hope the relationship develops in the final version in a way that was started in the teaser. Listening to Oliver lament that he fucked up and his best friend would never speak to him again is what got me hooked.
Tom Noyb
2023-11-11 17:15:39 +0000 UTCWoof Woof Woof!! Awroooooo!!!!!!
steam
2023-10-03 06:30:49 +0000 UTCYup. Still in the oven π :3
AwArdiente
2023-09-30 07:12:24 +0000 UTCLove it. More to cum I hope???
Charles Knister
2023-09-30 01:52:34 +0000 UTC
