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Open Thread for story ideas

Hey studs and sluts, 

Glady you enjoyed Pump, a couple of good things planned for the next installment already!

Will have the next exclusive patreon post out in a few days.

Also, I have started writing the follow up to the chyoa SFS thread where Ian goes soft, so hopefully that will be an addition this month. 

Thought I would offer an open thread here in the comments to see if you have story ideas.

Quite often other people's ideas are better than my own...

So here's your choice. If you've ever wanted me to write something, put the details in below and sell it to me - maybe I'll pick it up...

Comments

Hi and thanks for the reply. I’ve read the 8 chapters of Major Pump and I really love how this story is developing and the various characters with their unique “features”. I agree with your view about the Bimbo sluts and I think they have to be mega-titted whores. I’ve read many stories on literotica, LPSG and asstr archives, and appreciate the stories about hugely endowed males exploiting their “assets” with the female population. So I was really happy to come across your writings on Chyoa with SFS. Still making my way through that one too! Anyway, keep up the great work. It is appreciated!

Neetbix

Thanks for the comment and glad you enjoy, always happy to hear feedback and cheers for the praise. There is a reason for this which is that a *very* long time ago a lot of these stories came out of collaboration and I think people didn't want to give people too many personal characteristics in case it messed with other people's conceptions of who they were and what was going on. The orgy is *very* difficult to write because there are no scene, costume or plot changes to introduce a new dimension so it is incredibly hard to keep it interesting without repeating myself (I hope I have accomplished that), and in general I have a mental note of dick sizes and characters' personal traits and identifying features in my head and go with that. When you delve into School for Scandal or Major Pump you should find a lot more differentiation (that studs in Major Pump are all individuals for reasons that should become clear). With that said, other than tattoos and hair colour/style, I will *never* deviate from tall, tanned, statuesque bimbos with huge round asses, ripped stomachs and massive spheroid tits, it's literally the only thing I find appealing in women and love me or hate me, that is a cast iron guarantee. My stuff can be very one-note, I don't really do plot, will-they-won't-they relationship dynamics, taboos or anything like that, but I actually consider that a *lot* easier to write than what I do (sounds contradictory). Actually I feel if I write too much plot and interiority it's cheating you guys because it's not actual smut. There are probably 2 or 3 people that write this stuff better than I do, in my opinion, that's it. Glad you enjoy and let know what you think to the other stories.

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Love your writing so far, and have read most of Tharros Cave Orgy already. I am yet to delve into other stories. One thing I would like to see with your characters is more differentiation in their body parts. While I appreciate that they're all Big titted Bimbos and monstercocked men, I think it would add another dimension to the story telling if each character is blessed with different features in some way. Of course, I'm referring to their essential equipment.. e.g. Dareios' monstercock could be blessed with a extra-large glans which challenges the girls more than the other guys who may have different features, equally challenging. I hope you don't mind me giving the feedback, as I do enjoy your stories and your writing style, I just think the characters' features could be differentiated more for an added dimension to the story. Keep up the great work!

Neetbix

Awesome!

Horsemarc

Yes!! You’d knock it out of the park I know it. Nobody can compare to the virility and cock size of these studs. 🤤

B W

yep, just figuring out what to do with the next part

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Lol, bless you. Can't see myself ever writing a story about a plain girl. Bimbos only!

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I've never done cuck stuff but I would be interested in doing something where a male character was totally destroyed in some way but witnessing superior virility

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This is an excellent idea! I have drafted an into to a Major Pump spinoff where Major Pump is given and assignment to *empty* as many studs as humanly possible to *decrease* population explosion, but it might be an idea to combine it with this so that there is a nemesis who is trying to *increase* it at the same time!

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Yay more Robert and Sanddy😄

Archerfan

Maby continue that new plain looking girl story thread on sfs. Love to see what you can do with that. Give the poor girl a confidence boost

Archerfan

Would love to see your take on The Wedding Trip which is one of the best super stud stories of all time! 16” young stud cucks limp dick husband on his honeymoon on a private island with his huge titted Asian trophy wife. It’d fit perfectly with your type of characters (plus an infertile beta boi forced to watch his knockout wife get plowed 😂) https://www.thevalkyrie.com/ladybumps/stories/steele/wedding-trip.htm

B W

Story idea: setting, northwest US 2098, tropical climate, bikini wear weather all the time. Size queen young woman develops a community of bimbo size queens who specialize in surgically replacing inadequately hung male body builders with monstercocks, 12 inch minimum. Focus is heavy on statistics around size of everything, including orgasm intensity and duration. Our protagonist is on a quest for a new male who can repopulate the climate destroyed humanity with super studs and sluts, with awesome sexual and supernatural powers

Horsemarc


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