The Acquisition - Short Story
Added 2023-12-20 12:22:21 +0000 UTCHi folks! I promised a short story as part of the charity rewards! I'm not a writer, and I do scripts, not prose, so this is just a fun little bit of practice for the novel reward (coming 2024) - I hope you like it!
THIS STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WEBSITE ONLY
Comments
If I would be him I would have given it to you gladly.
Freddy94
2024-02-28 20:32:22 +0000 UTCMarvelous writing, Mistress Caliaβ¦..With as many talents as you have, itβs no wonder legions of slaves are begging to serve you ποΈ
servantX
2023-12-30 13:13:29 +0000 UTCif i were Mister Horne, i would beg and plead to be kept on as a janitor and slaveβ¦.for no pay, of course.
servantX
2023-12-30 13:10:25 +0000 UTCWell written and highly arousing, 4me, i imagine it as a first of a series, were after 1st then she builds her staff, incorporating the tech, new hires, empire is build, reaching us, telling us the story, a loopy a searies...
ej
2023-12-22 11:42:34 +0000 UTCThis was a very fun read! I wasn't sure what I was expecting at first, but I think was a great choice in building a prologue to Caliacorp. Good to see that CEO get what's coming to him. The employees sounded miserable anyway, so they should be much happier under new "ownership". Can't wait to read your novel when you finish it!
Noblebluelion
2023-12-22 05:40:43 +0000 UTC
