XaiJu
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Readability/Usability of Front Page Feedback!

Hello everyone,

I would like some feedback on the text written in the main/middle column of my
front page

I don't have too much control over placement of the column. Neither am I given a whole lot of stylistic possibilities with the limited tools given to my by Patreon.
However, I wonder if it's too much text.

The questions you can ask yourself are:
1. Is it clear what I get out of this Patreon?
2. Does it explain how I can navigate through it properly?
3. Is the wording easy to understand?
4. Does it have as little as possible but as much as necessary text?
5. Are the pictures of Sun Hee, Youra and Kyung-Hu too distracting or nice?

Maybe you can come up with more things :)

I welcome any and all feedback on this matter as I'm looking into making things as user friendly as Patreon allows me! If you rather write to me in private, please do so via the message system or hit me up on Discord!

Thank you all and please look forward to the upcoming rewards and goodies!


Comments

I think the Super Sexy Menu explanation could be made more concise - I'm happy to explain in further details on Discord when you have a moment.

Zenphore


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