Bodysuit 23 #527
Added 2020-07-17 00:42:31 +0000 UTCRed text is tentative. What happened was the original dialogue exchange had Angela repeating herself in panels 1 and 4, albeit with somewhat different phrasing. Cooper pointed it out and I've spent a couple hours of reworking the exchange. With Cooper offline I have yet to run it by him to see what he thinks of this direction. One issue is if I go with this, that means the next couple pages will need rewriting, along with looking ahead to later in the chapter to make sure everything plays out with this page in mind. Not only that, but it might change the tone for things down the road. It's all up in the air right now. There's a chance the dialogue might change tomorrow, so don't get too attached to it just yet.
