Bothersome Smother - A Quick Question
Added 2023-07-19 16:03:41 +0000 UTC
A woman so beautiful that she should be framed for posterity.
I am currently writing the Breast Smother scene, and I'm facing a bizarre narrative conundrum. Let me explain.
The scene needs to end in an ellipse leading to the final beats of the story. So, the protagonist needs to be choked out by Jazmine's breasts. Which in turn means that whether or not you win or lose the breast smother minigame becomes irrelevant.
If the player wins, Jazmine still has to smother them anyways so they lose consciousness and are brought to the final scene. Only, she does it quickly.
If the player loses, the only difference is that Jazmine smothers the player for a longer time...?
Unless...something else happens if you lose? So I'm turning to you for ideas on what COULD happen.
Comments
So a more psychological approach. This could be integrated as well.
Peach Punch Games
2023-07-20 00:54:52 +0000 UTCI think yasmin should just recatch the player and reveal how much she was playing with him.
nantalaus
2023-07-19 23:04:21 +0000 UTCYeah, this is basically how it's already going down. If you win, you get a short smother scene, but if you lose (like in the other minigames so far), you get a full-on smother scene. But both results in the same outcome, in the end, and it just feels like a missed opportunity, you know?
Peach Punch Games
2023-07-19 18:12:56 +0000 UTCIf the player wins, it means Jazmine couldn’t smother him the way she wanted. She then gets pissed at the player, wraps her arms around his head and buries him further in her cleavage, putting an end to his struggle. In both cases, you go to the next scene - however, depending on the outcome of the smothering game, the text could be slightly different: she could show some acknowledgement of the will to survive and escape of the player, for example.
strfan
2023-07-19 17:40:46 +0000 UTC
