Not a continuation of last chapter. I want to instead focus on turning points and places where things will happen. This will be rewritten, possibly with no reference to this page. I'm trying to solidify the characters and style in my head right now.
Please don't edit this as a proof. It's not even a rough draft! Comments on direction are welcome.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ppK9uOb9H7jcUTvKYs5fZBNZVgLVfhm7HUmncpkgklg/