Magic College Ch. 16
Added 2023-02-20 12:37:49 +0000 UTCThe one in which things become worse. They've gotta get worse, after all, before they get better.
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Ah, thanks. I'll have to go through and fix that. As for the content of it, yeah. This is probably the darkest chapter in the story. It went through a few rewrites already with me trying to get the tone just right.
Damaged
2023-02-21 00:53:39 +0000 UTCAbsolutely chilling chapter. Very nicely done. I only edited it once, then saw it 2-3 more times. English does not like shapechange. Shape change, Shape-change, Shapeshift. Not sure how much you enjoy the word, but ultimately it is your story and you can call it whatever you want.
Eric Reitze
2023-02-20 20:54:22 +0000 UTC
