The Heart Grows Ch. 46
Added 2022-09-29 15:53:39 +0000 UTCAnother week down! Who knows what craziness will unfold?
Well, I do, but I'm not telling.
Oh, and I'm working on a wiki for this story. If you want to help, head over to: https://the-heart-grows.excessive.space/index.php/Main_Page
Comments
A good idea, though with my publish time at around 14 hours away (most of which being sleep) a little hard to do. I'll see if I can finish today's work quickly enough to tackle it.
Damaged
2022-10-01 10:37:26 +0000 UTCYeah, from here on out the story tends to not flit around and ensure it gets everyone's PoV, instead focusing on the dungeon as a whole. Especially as the story draws into Tier 2, when another floor starts and stuff becomes more complicated at a macro level. Perhaps I will name "districts" of the dungeon and help people get used to wider terms.
Damaged
2022-10-01 10:30:53 +0000 UTC3. Combat and especially Wild dying in this chapter felt a little rushed, maybe some more descriptive depiction of the opposition and the fighting before the conclusion.
Smaug
2022-10-01 10:30:42 +0000 UTC2. All kinds of tactical maneuvers in the dungeon will be confusing for readers as the thing is rather large without every segment clearly named (and there are a lot of kobolds).
Smaug
2022-10-01 10:28:13 +0000 UTC
