XaiJu
ByronMulvogue
ByronMulvogue

patreon


The Heart Grows Ch. 44

Served hot and fresh! Get it a few days early!

Comments

Oh, with regard to the style-type fixes (spaces around em dashes, possessive nouns ending in s and z, etc) unless something looks inconsistent with how I otherwise write, they are not required. I have developed my style choices over many years, both for ease of writing and for ease of reading, and am not really looking to change those. That said, if something does look hard to read, please let me know.

Damaged

Thanks, fixed that.

Damaged

Lol. Fife wimped out. "Brayden was suddenly on a battlefield. Around him, demons and devils fought with angels and angels of war. He faced off not with something evil, but his god." Weird sentence with the double angels. Are they supposed to be something else?

Eric Reitze


More Creators