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"Commitment" Chapter 12

Fate unfolds in the final chapter of Commitment. An epilogue will follow, and then I'll begin work on my next main project :-)

In the meantime, was there a moment from the story that didn't get illustrated that you'd like to see, or is there a fun scenario involving the characters that you've imagined? Lemme know!

Use this link to read the chapter with illustrations. The password for the link can be found here.

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Comments

To be in a Polyamorous Throuple with two hot Giant Gods!!!! Fuck yesss! 🥰🤯🙄🤭🤩

LoveGiants (Polyamorous) Seeking 4 BrotherHusbands

I think I had a similar moment when I read the last chapter too!

LookoutBlo

I still have a literary hangover from this. I feel like the epilogue is just going to reset it.

Brandon Caviness

ah very cool. 6 or 7-folded would be so hot, if he was on Miles's tip and trying not to slip into the hole, so to speak :P

c3p0

The dream sequence is just Aaron having a fever dream. He's never actually made that small, but that doesn't mean we can't draw him that way and do some fun "what-if" scenarios :-) Do you have anything in mind? AlienEtiquette shared his character notes with me at the beginning, which included the math for how the shrining worked: Normal Aaron: 6 foot 3 inches tall 3-folded Aaron: 12.5 inches tall (chapter 2) 4-folded Aaron: 6.6 inches tall (chapters 4-12) 5-folded Aaron: 3.6 inches tall (end of chapter 12) 6-folded Aaron: 1.9 inches tall 7-folded Aaron: 1 inch tall

LookoutBlo

Absolutely insane ending brilliantly illustrated again. I'm curious though - it seems his size in his dream and in the final scene are different - in fact he seems almost the same size as before. I would love to see more stuff with him at his smallest!

c3p0

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you've enjoyed it :-) There will be more to come.

LookoutBlo

Your artwork on this has been amazing! Beautifully done, sir.

Brandon Caviness

This story has been a whirlwind... The last chapter was no exception.

Brandon Caviness


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