TIOM P.78
Added 2023-07-01 11:04:20 +0000 UTCGood morning or good evening everyone, as always, sorry again for the delay, but every time I want to try to add something to the page. It was difficult because at first Mosslyn was particularly deformed and I was afraid she might look ridiculous, so I changed her in the last panel. I also wanted to try a new style for the balloons during the sex scenes. I made them transparent so you could see the characters better, and I added movement to the font to give a better sense of motion to the entire scene. I won't deny that I went to see the latest Spider-Man movie and this particularly inspired me. I loved the balance of colors and mixed chiaroscuro to different styles and that gave me an extra push to try them on my comic in order to enhance emotions during sex. Yet I know I'm still far from the perfection I want to achieve for sex scenes in my comic. I want it to be less controlled and I want to be able to "emotionally get dirty" the panel, trying to drive the reader's emotions like he/her was in the middle of the sex! :D
This, unfortunately, makes the whole panel still too academic in my eyes. It also took me a lot to balance the colors. I noticed many people don't like too much too dark ambiance during sex scenes, cause this force their eyes. But at the same time, I wanted to make it clear that they were in a kind of semi-darkness since they had only one light source (the one above them) and, at most, the lights that were reflected on the window.
